Redskye

RESERVED!!!

The King of Oren needs an heir soon lest we fall into chaos when he grows old with age and is unable to reign

WHERE ARE HIS SONS!!!

*You notice books left behind in taverns with an extract of a journal. after examination you learn it belongs to Redskye*

This world changes much, a lot actually in the time I have been here. It has been long for me in this place but not long enough for me to mark this place. Though the time I have been here is pretty much a blink of my own long life I must confess… Much has happened with what I have seen kings change, Kings fall and kings anew, wars and death something I am used to; the smoke it bear’s rises slowly but it falls down again just as fast. People have seen me and my mask and know me by the mask some know the name and hail me a hero. Some hail me a monster… I do not care, I often fall into the category of neither, where I am from, I am regarded the same as I am here.

Now who I am, I am a man whom champions a cause but not for Aerial Nor for Iblees. But for Safety and Freedom. An artist of these ways and a keeper of peace. The Ascended are in the right place and mind trying to preserve life. Iblees thoug however tries to strike every man down, I admit I have almost fallen victim as a pawn in this game of chess but I pulled from the game but I come aside sometimes knocking down pieces I deem are too dangerous in the bid to balance the game out. Sometimes the best Master is the one who does not play in the sport any more for he knows the dangers. I’ve seen much before…

*you see a rough drawn sketch of thousands of bodies and thousands more still alive fighting that covers 2 pages of the excerpt. Though roughly drawn you can see the faces clearly*

That is just one scene I can recall each of those names I know them all… So many deaths… I cannot stand it much longer but it carries on. I just fear too many will carry on dieing in wars before their times… I cannot stand it anymore; I wear a mask to hide this shame for one reason. I fear Our end… but I prepare for it also much like many of us.

This is my journal for now… I shall release more when the time comes but this is the end of the journal as you see but not the beginning neither

If my character was close to anything, I would reckon a Commander Sue, but at the same time he does have debilitating flaws that I havent seen any character in Aegis really figure out. I mean, when I started my character, he was pretty hazy in combat, but at this current age, he has gotten wise in terms of military strategy, I do lead the Teutonic Order :P :lol:

I don't like calling them Commander Sue's I prefer to call them Mary Tzu's but meh

((How can someone be killed 3 times in a battle if you can't return to a battle after you die?))

Reading the Forums I've been told that you go back home, I live in Alras and this fight was on the road to my house. What do i do? ignore people attacking me IC when im getting to my house OOC?

A good character i've always found interesting is make a Duke Nuke'm esque Character but make him do INCREDIBLY BORING THINGS in his spare time AND HE ENJOYS IT, Such as Spending his time reading very classical literature and fishing for hobbies (troll but still point stands)

(THERE WAS A LITMUS TEST BUT I REMOVED IT as it was there, I skimmed and now just read properly)

Ok, Serious now, But what makes it the 1st piece of watermelon on the server. you could be lieing to us :C

1 MINAS I WILL LIKELY JUST EAT IT!!!! :P

why not just have the ability for those whom are not bedrock donators to be able to purchase a cape for say 50,000 minas

There is a modification to the definition of RP if you'd take a look

I like this application, The formatting could be better, But i think this is good

Regardless i cannot approve this application but i'd like to support it to go through!

needs a longer description and a stronger biography

(you never mentioned the duel on the armistice properly :P)

<You see a message on the board written with elegant handwriting but readable to any eye>

There has been much fighting. The Orcs of Krugmar, The Humans of Oren, And several other parties with involvment in this war. It became too much for us. Al'khazar was occupied by Dwarves and Orcs yes they had reason. But A treaty was signed and a tribute was paid. For their withdrawal from the city, A Duel was declared by the orc Warboss Blawharag(Blawharag), And Redskye, The Harlequin, Redskye Was victorious, But the fight was not for Any kingdom, But for safety of all living.

There is an armistice. No Orc or Human shall attack eachother For any reason regarding war. Infact, There shall be no violence, As we wish for Peace for Oren, and Aegis

(The vote i made was a troll vote :P)

Enor is a good man, Young in his role in the throne, But i am assured he will do a fine job, patience... is a virtue

(A good counterance for this, Mentione earlier. Ask to have a Farm set up on your roof, Where sunlight and rain comes own, That would be much more realistic, Or on a balcony where you could grow perhaps, 3 wheat at a time, Just have the farm outside, unless theres a REALLY REALLY GOOD way you can write it to justify the allowance of having it indoors/underground But its highly unlikely)

The music of the glorious C418 will flood the streets with its harmonious tunes and soothing sounds. You cannot stop the rise of the arts for it will engulf the city with the new shipment of music from the lands of unknown. Resistance is futile.

nothing against the music, It just sometimes causes laagier machines to overload with packets and slows them down, much like the NPC Entities we have all around the city.

Music is no crime, Just let the record play through then play it again, don't cut it short then do it again

The music of the glorious C418 will flood the streets with its harmonious tunes and soothing sounds. You cannot stop the rise of the arts for it will engulf the city with the new shipment of music from the lands of unknown. Resistance is futile.

nothing against the music, It just sometimes causes laagier machines to overload with packets and slows them down, much like the NPC Entities we have all around the city.

Music is no crime, Just let the record play through then play it again, don't cut it short then do it again

-for which job are you applying Lesser treasurer

- how often you are online per week It varies but its a lot

-why you want the job I want the job because I am going to try helping Al Khazar in these times of need in anyway possible

- what experiences you have of this job/similar I am very good with money and distributing it I have went to a excellent school and I have studied politics for years. (i think maybe 3 in game years)

- why you think you should get the job I think I should get the job because I am well suited for the job as stated earlier I know of what I am doing and signing up for.

You're 15, you studied politics in the courts of kings and bishops since you were 12? I think places emphasis of your uncertaincy in your ability

The Biography and backstory should Be at least a paragraph of at least 6-9 sentences, The more indepth the biography you have, The better a chance you have.

There is no screenshot image of your skin. To get the best optimal screenshot is do open up your inventory bar and take a screenshot. Then use an image editing program such as photoshop, Or paint to those not so technically skilled with photoshop, Just use MS Paint otherwise.

The personality does not really match the personal history at some points. This is my opinion though so you may differ with my ideas

Take those points into consideration. You may get accepted after modifying so

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: metaljordi

-How old are you?: 19 years of age

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: English is my 1st Language.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well there isn't much that can be said. nor is there much that cannot be said, But I am a brilliant builder, coming 2nd place in the Worth1000 Fantasy-2 Contest http://minecraft.worth1000.com/entries/649470/the-hilda-garde

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well i can get on whenever i find it appropiate for me, Which is alot of the time

-How long have you played minecraft?: since Beta 1.2

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Depends on the context. I know when to avoid a chracter from being too much in the aspect of a Deus ex Machina or having it appear as a "Mary Sue" Im not stupid when it comes to RPing, I have ran and still run my own RP group on another un-associated website with a completely different theme/idea to this story

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Hopefully not full of boxes and terrible builds like 90% of the other servers i have been on. The video you have which was favourited by the Youtuber "BlueXephos" shows promise. I am to hope the same is applied for logging on myself personally

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a few servers in my time, But i usually keep dedication. I am a sniper on a server known as The Voxel Box. Regarded as the most esteemed and well respected creative server and one of the oldest servers in the community. I have also played on a friends server called Bloodlust which changed to Conflict. I still go on that server but its more focused on PVP, when sometimes i just want to build cool stuff and that server does not facilitate my building needs very well.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I understand the Rules and the Lore. and i agree to the rules. The Lore is still a deep thing and i am reading this whilst writing this application.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orcs, Elves, Dwarves, Humans

-How did you hear about us?: As a good majority of people will say, BlueXephos's liking of your promotional video

-Did you vote?: Yes i voted on 2 of the 3 options, The 3rd one was not allowing me to,

-What was your favourite Law?: Keeping in character

-What was your least favourite Law?: PVP without RP, Sometimes a fight can just be a silent ambush waiting to happen with little story needed

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Redskye

In-Character:

-Character Name: Lombard

-What is your Race?: Elf or Human, It depends on which leader prefers to take me more. But by personal Preference, Humans, as their architectural style is more flexible

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Redskye

-Biography: From a city a long way away, There was a war that went on. A group of Loyalists from times of old struck from record after saving their home from a terrible evil, His descendants brought the fight against those who ruled unjustly removing any man who challenged or voiced his mind. They were infuriated. They fought hard. He was born into a Blacksmithing family, A wealthy one at that, But due to the Condora Rulers They demolished the Homes of many, And seized Lombards family's and many other's assets for expansion. Lombard joined the Loyalist Rebels in their crusade to do what is right, Alongside an expedition team to learn more of the old terror that plagued his home but was destroyed thankfully, They found A man, Redskye, hidden in sleep beneath some rubble. Still looking Youthful and awake thought to be lost after 300 years. Lombard several others who accompanied him took him to the Loyalist Masters and appointed him as a champion of the peoples. Throughout, He became a close friend of Redskye fighting alongside him in battle, But due to circumstances Redskye vanished from the city and began his crusade and left his Realm but He followed to make sure he was safe, Always shadowing him but watching him, He knew his friend was Rash and knew he needed to know his time he lived in was no more

-Character Age: Lombard is unaware of his age due to his many dimensions and worlds he traversed through alongside Redskye. He could be old. He could be young. He does not tell.

-Character Appearance: Wearing his Mask and Hood, With his checkered Pantaloons, He never reveals his face, knowing it is his greatest weapon, and his greatest weakness, His checkerboard coat is one to tell of his story and his fate.

-Character Personality: He is a Quiet person speaking only when necessary And carries himself with mannerisms that could be confused with that of an Elf. He is a great man with counting, And is often cold to people who distrusts but very embracing to friends. He is very skeptical and paranoid with his attitude so doesn't make friends easily. He often laughs much like a maniac though at random times but often holds himself.

-Your ambitions: To make sure His task of defending his friends and close ones regardless of cost.

-Can your character read or write?: Growing up in a Wealthy Family of Smiths His family could afford him an education

-Can your character mine?: A man of Crafting Metals, Is not one with the earth, But has traveled with his friends to the deepest cores so can navigate himself through a mine

-Are you a capable builder?: A member of the Voxelbox Minecraft server (apologies for being OOC) of course.

-Can you wield a sword?: Fighting in a War that seems to have nearly no End, Lombard has learnt the ways of war like no other, Though some may say otherwise

-Enjoy Farming?: A vital Thing for bringing food, But Does not enjoy farming. Will do it if nessecary but won't out of choice

-Does your character have any special skills?: Very strong analytic thinker and able to spot things if out of place with a snap

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/shaco-the-demon-jester/

Optional Information: (Redskye's 2nd Account I need this one approved if possible!!)

OOC : (I'm all for music being played in Al'kazar for records but it can cause some people with lower end machines to laag out if you keep continually spamming them, Let the music play til the end. Then leave it alone for a bit. nobody has been arrested for playing music its just the annoying attitude you have applied, Nobody is going to be arrested for music, Take that as a FACT)

TL:DR (don't spam records please)

sorry for sounding like a grammar nazi D: but is that the correct script? i aint refreshed so i dunno if its changed yet

The Royal Family Can fail, Whilst a council can unite each and every single one of you will stand united against any threat that is to come to Oren here for all time!

Many things will be rebuilt though once a council is established yes. The church will be repaired and it shall be a priority, Many people will be given jobs as we know the unemployment of Oren is a bad thing, The Guards will be having Reform and people will be united. I ask you to support this plan