The Cleaning Crew

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This is a decent application, but there are a couple of things that need changing before I can accept it.

 

1. Your powergaming definition is very close, but not quite correct. If you want to see what we're looking for, you may check some of the implemented apps. Just use your own words! Copy/pasting anything from anywhere else onto your app is considered plagiarism and will net you a denial and a 1-week ban from posting new ones.

 

2. Normandor was a city in Asulon, if I'm not wrong. Currently, everyone lives in Anthos. If you could change your city of residence to a city from there, your bio would be great.

 

3. When you say that you can see clearly up to 200 yards, I hope you don't mean that you can hit a target that far out, reliably. I know from IRL experience that most bows won't even fire that far. As long as you just know that, that part's fine.

 

Make these changes within the next 24 hours via the edit button at the bottom-right of your post and I'll move this app up to Accepted. Good luck!

 

I feel like you know what you're saying in the powergaming definition, but I'll send you a message just to make sure. Welcome to Anthos. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you'll be able to log in as a full member. Have fun!

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Very good first attempt! This is about as perfect as apps can get. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you should be able to log in as a full member.

Also, something you should note: While our original purpose may have been to try to emulate a LOTR setting, we strayed far from that path almost immediately after the server got up and running. So don't expect it to be too much like that.

Your bio was fixed very well, but what you added to your powergaming definition isn't quite what I was looking for. Please use the edit button at the bottom right of your application to change it. DON'T post a new app. If you can't figure out how to edit, message me through the forums. I'll explain it there.

You're so close!

 

Alrighty! As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you should be able to log in as a full member. Have fun!

Alright, this is a good application. There are only a couple of things that need changed before I can accept you.

1. You actually had the most important part of the powergaming definition in your last application, so I feel I can tell you the rest. Koto was just looking for the common sense part of it, like no leaping 20 feet into the air or beating an orc in an arm wrestling match or sprinting away from a fight after being stabbed through the chest. Just not doing impossible things.

2. We do need to have a screenshot of your skin before I can accept you. If you're not sure how to do that, then feel free to message me through the forums and I'll walk you through it.

Make these changes to your app within the next 24 hours via the edit button at the bottom-right of your post and I can move this app on up to Accepted!

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You didn't change anything. You may re-apply in 24 hours.

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There you go. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you'll be able to log in as a full member. Have fun!

There's just a couple things that need changing with this app.

 

1. Your powergaming definition is incomplete. You've got part of it, but there's another important part that you need to know before we can accept you. Look up a couple of different definitions and add what you think that might be. Remember to use your own words!

 

2. Your bio needs to have a little lore in it. A couple of current city names, something like that. Just so we know that you actually read a little about the world.

 

Make these changes to your app within the next 24 hours and I can move this app over to accepted.

You got it! Welcome to Anthos. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you'll be able to log in as a full member. Have fun!

Better, but there are still a few things that need changing.

 

1. Your powergaming definition is still wrong. Look up some different definitions and edit that part.

 

2. The Undead have been gone for over 100 years, in-game. Your character was born long after our conflict with them. The new main antagonist is the Black Scourge.

 

3. Include a little (non-undead) lore in your biography. A couple of current city names, well-known people you might have met, etc. 

 

Make these changes within the next 24 hours via the edit button at the bottom right of your post and I can move this app over to accepted.

 

Alright, then. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you should be able to log in as a full member. Have fun!

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Please wait until 24 hours have passed since you posted your last application.

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A very good first attempt, but a couple things need edited before I can accept this app.
 
1. Your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please look it up again and fix that.
 
2. We do have to ask that you provide a screenshot of your skin. You press the circled button below and simply enter the image URL in the box that pops up. When you hit OK, the image will appear. Using sites like imgur or gyazo to give your image a URL is necessary for this.

 
Make these changes within the next 24 hours via the edit button at the bottom right of your post, just to the left of the multiquote button, and I can move this app on over to accepted!

 

Sorry, you didn't change anything. You can re-apply in 24 hours.

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Please read all of the rules and use the application format found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/94683-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Moved to Accepted Forum

We actually moved away from Aegis over 100 years ago, ICly. At 18 years old, your character would have had to have been born in Anthos, which is where we live currently. If you could switch out Oren for a current city name, then I can move this over to accepted! 

 

To edit your post, click on the edit button at the bottom right of it. It's just to the left of your multiquote button.

 

There you go. Welcome to Anthos! As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you should be able to log in as a full member.

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Alright, I'll put it on pending this time because I don't like denying an app more than once for the same reasons. You didn't quite fix anything that I mentioned in your last app, besides telling me your time zone.

 

1. Your powergaming definition is still wrong. Look up the definition again. Maybe check some of the implemented apps, see what they put there. But don't just copy/paste. Copying something onto your app from anywhere else is considered plagiarism and will net you a 1 week ban from posting new apps. Use your own words.

 

2. You didn't include any more lore in your bio. You have the name of the land itself, but that's not exactly what we're looking for. Mention a specific city or two that currently exist. Check the wiki if you don't know any.

 

3. You didn't expand upon your weaknesses exactly like I had in mind, which I don't blame you for. I didn't describe what I wanted. Really, I'm just looking for some confirmation that you're not going to log in thinking this is a PVP RP game like Skyrim. There's plenty of fighting that goes on, but you shouldn't create your character with only fighting in mind. Maybe you're particularly gullible? Maybe you're a depressed alcoholic because you miss your parents? Something like that.

 

Make these changes via the edit button at the bottom right of your post within the next 24 hours and I can move this on over to accepted. If you have any questions, feel free to message me through the forums, skype (TheCleaningCrew1), or teamspeak.

 

There you go! I'll move this over to accepted, then. As soon as a GM gets around to implementing you, you should be able to log in as a full member.