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  1. Sets his fingers into position, before gently pressing his lips onto his mouthpiece blowing. He fingers glide across his flute playing his notes beautifully and fluently. He shudders slightly, looking down after each high note he plays, moving in a circular and diangle motion. He closes his eyes daftly.

    ((Similar rhythm, different tone and notes, but all in all, its about sorrow, sadness.))

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    (( Name and artist: Unknown. ))

    (( Disclaimer: This belongs to it respected owners, the server nor I claim ownership of this pierce of music, all rights and ownership belongs to its owner.))

  2. Looks to Vallel'Yuln, wiping the tear and the remnants of it from his face and the table, before frowning he quickly covers it up with smile, Hoping she will accept it.

    .. Ker'ayla, llir, What do-yo..-u me-an ?

    Hesitates stumbling over his words.

    ((Updated: Thought I would add some more touch-ups before I go, <3 you all! ))

  3. As Altasriel catches the word of Faerin death he frowns immensely, silent tears begin stroll down his cheeks, hitting the grass, shaking his head dramatically not believing the recent event, putting him into a deep silence. He quietly mutters to himself.

    Mali'aheral.. Why.. ? .. You were.. Exceptional person, you never deserved this! ..

    A serious but furious expression is now present upon his face, his fist tightly clenched raggedly. The silent tears continue to flow but after a minute he starts to sings, a beautiful, peaceful and fluent sound flow through the city of Haelun'or, easing his mind. He opens his fist slowly, closing his eyes daftly upon finishing.

    Van'ayla, Faerin.. My friend..

  4. After reading this topic, I'm quite impressed and amazed on the work, considering I RPed with you abit earlier I would love to RP again, again. From my experience I think this will make up great RP, creating a great RP experience as well, and dramatic.

    RP Name : Altasriel

    Job/Profession/Specialties :

    Hunter/Archer/Warrior

    Justiscar of the Secound Legion, Master at both the Blade and Bow, and both a specialist Protective and Master in Healing Magic ((After reading a post I must confirm RPing Magic)) and is officially now a builder of Haelun'or.

    -- An Official Builder of Haelun'or

    -- Justicar of Second Legion

    -- Master of Healing Magic, and Adept in Protective Magic.

    -- Master at both the Blade and Bow (100)

    Which Recommended Tabs did you have (Celia will not judge purely based on this, but it helps alot in wooing her.)?

    Altasriel is able to accompany her on hunting trips, assisting her in personal matters, and curtensely will help her in the best of his ability when needed. He known by a few, but he delves deep into both the High Elven Customs and Elven tongue for this is his Main Research in his study ((Primary Objective)) He as existing amount of minas enough to last him a while or purchase a small home (( Over 1000 ) Altasriel parents were both Mali'aheral but died during there escape to Asulon, by they had different motives then other Maliaheral. He is kind heart-ed, passionate, and cares for other Mali'aheral and there motives, other then his own.

    -- A pure blood (Mali'aheral)

    -- Basic/Grip on the Elven Tongue, Human cultures.

    -- Seeks to provide, assist, and protect, the Mali'aheral, teaching them, providing them items, and protecting them from whatever dangers that would harm them.

    -- Has no criminal record

    Great Pluses Tabs do you have (Celia will not judge purely based on this, but it helps alot in wooing her.)?

    Over the years he has been practicing the flute, writing poetry, singing and attempting create art. He delves deep into his study but causally goes on hunting trips or interacts with the other Mali'aheral. He is both a skilled warrior, archer and hunter.

    -- Skilled, warrior, archer and hunter.

    -- Enjoys a nice conversation with any Mali'aheral.

    -- Basic at Art

    -- Adept at the flute

    -- Adept at Singing

    -- Basic at Poetry

  5. Goes on his usual morning stroll around Haelun'or inhaling the fresh air, before unbuckling his satchel, pulling out a small notebook in his hand and a quill, he opens his book vastly reading the previous content from within. After recalling his past moments, he starts to walk quickly towards the notice board while reading his notebook. He shoots a sullen glare at the board, realizing the note but only seeing the title "Legion Disbanded" he sighs raggedly, slamming his own book with a snap, putting Altasriel into a deep silence. He curls his finger, rubbing his chin between finger and thumb, suddenly he walks towards, slapping the side his hip with his left hand furiously. Looked at the note with pleading his eyes, before opening his notebook once more, ripping out a page, pressing it against the board, he writes:

    Disband? I wish to join the "Second Legion" as I was Justicar in the first, preferable my skills will be put to better use as a "Silumar".. But I respect the council decision on reforming the Legion. You'll receive a full report on my skill set.. When we meet.. ((maximas1244))

    Altasriel ~

    He than pins under the note.

    The page has Elven Vines en-carvings on the edge of page with flowers decorated around them, the page is clearly tattered. While his writing lies in the center of page.

  6. (( There shall be screenies :D BUT mine shall be better XD ))

    Wanders back and forth in the college, frustrated on what to present to the couple. He grits his teeth nervously, embarrassed. Thinking he'll be the only one without a gift , he stops abruptly, tapping his foot immensely,. muttering quietly.

    UGH! ..What should I get? .. A set of flowers, Valuables.. Wait! Should I sing? Er... No, No, Something else..

    Taps his chin thoughtfully, groaning slighly. Atlasriel eyes trail around the room, before letting out a guttural huff. He closes his eyes daftly, humming an elven tune seeming to let his mind wander. After a few minutes he opens his eyes vastly, snapping his finger dramatically causing a light echo around the college.

    Yes! That's it (Lona) , Flowers and Minas!

  7. (( Hey I'm sorry about this but how many more hours until it starts? ))

    After receiving the letter, Altasriel leans in on his chair in his home on his elbows, chewing on a loaf of bread thoroughly while reading through the invitation quizzically, after finishing the note he smiles warmly, sighing happily, mumbling his expressions.

    Wedding? Brilliant this is truly a blessed event, I'm would happily attend this.

    Finishes eating , lowering his hands, gripping his plate loosely, slowly getting up as he walks over to sink, humming a cheerful tune. Placing the plate gently within the sink before opening his draw pulling out a jar of water and a glass. Filling the glass with water, he takes a sip from it while recalling his happiest memory's, smiling gratefully, shaking his head numbly and laughing bitterly.

  8. Thank you for your kind words, however I don't think we've met.

    Even so, I look forward to meeting you in the future.

    Great to hear about me from a spectator's view point.

    Thanks again. :grin:

    lol yeah.. It was way back in Aegis in Alras. Think I met and RPed with you about 2-3 times but they only lasted maybe 10-20 minutes laugh.gif

  9. After carefully reading this and looking over it three times... I don't know what to say, the application is impressive, wait I mean outstanding.

    Your RP amazing from my experience, your helpful, kind, AND why is this man not a GM!?!?

    You've my full support, Roze. All the way!

  10. HAELUN'OR CITIZENSHIP APPLICATION:

    Name:

    Atlraiel

    Truename ((MCName)):

    maximas1244

    Origin:

    My life began at Aegis in Laurelin, my parents taught me the arts of , Archery, Swords, Hunting, Survival, Healing and protective magic . Upon the sacking of Elandriel they were both killed.. It broke me.. I traveled aimlessly no where to go until I heard that we were leaving to a distant labd. Upon arriving at the docks, I was able to board the last ship leaving, watching my once known home being destroyed in front of my eyes. When arriving at the new land, all I had was a few minas, I bought what few supplies I could afford, the continuously traveled. No friends, barely any food until I heard of Haelun'or by journey lead me there.

    That's all I will say.

    How can you declare you are Mali'thill:

    From a young age I was taught High Elven values from my parents, who were Mali'thill. They were both respected people and honored. I shall serve our people till the end, respect our laws and follow them.

    Why do you wish to become a citizen of Haelun'or:

    Too long have I been separated from true kin,I hope my ability as a experienced healer, scholar, excellent swordsman and archer. ((100) It will also be enormous honor to serve the Haelun'or.

    What is your personal vision for our blessed race:

    That we stand united as one pure race, that our society operates through independence, look out for each other. We go through out the outside world studying the lesser races, herbs, so on. Other nations and races would revere us, let us do what we please, let our vast Haelun'or society expand. Our libraries, college would greatly expand homing our knowledge allowing no mortal to read or look upon every book and bit of knowledge. Finally that we live in peace and harmony.

    What does maehr'sae hiylun'ehya mean to you:

    Maehr’sae Hiylun’ehya is my code that my life is bound by. It's is my law and I shall follow it, this defines our race, a pure ideal, all my actions live around this ideal. Our ancestors lived by this, and I shall honor this.

    What Elven phrase do you particularly take to heart? Please explain why:

    Sadly I don't have a vast knowledge, if that is what you are insisting all I know is parts of our history. But the previous one is one I hold dearly knowledge, because knowledge gains us power and power is an ideal tool for us.

    What is the subject of the first book you will submit to the college:

    I wish to submit books of great importance, that would aid my brothers and sisters. Explaining the arts of healing, our tongue, and other great benefits,

    What would be your reaction if you ever saw a human, orc and unknown Mali'aheral travel the roads from Alras together:

    Would watch them from a distance.. Studying there every movement.. frankly this would be appalling, and I couldn't bare witnessing such a moment...However I shall attempt to bring him to the light. But if he denies than I shall consider him un-pure not a 'Mali'aheral'.

    What home would you like to receive: (If left blank you will be granted one of free residences, if one is available)

    Are there any other details about yourself you wish to relay to the council:

    Wish learn more of the 'Arts of healing', our heritage, our tongue, and to spend time with my true heritage and bloodline. Also to lay my eyes upon any other of the lesser races, just on the Mali'aheral.

  11. ((

    Great read quite enjoyed it, I'd love to reply to this topic in IC but I just want to be notified that has this been a public release. Such as does everyone know in IC? Because I don't want to Meta. But still, Bravo! That was quite impressive!

    ))

  12. ((To prevent any OOC or rage, I realize there is a military post 'The Sorani' but I am currently waiting for there new post))

    *A cloaked figure man walks up to the notice board of Elandriel, and puts up a note with a Raven feather attached to it, before slamming his dagger into it pinning it. He quietly stalks off into the shadows disappearing from sight.

    It's been so long... Dedicated my life to elves, you know. But as the years have passed and of the recent events the 'White Raven's' committed. I'm here to offer my services to the people of Elandriel, to serve and protect my Elven brothers and sisters once more. I'm here to renew my Oath to the Princedom of Malinor, to protect the Princes and Princess's of Malinor once more.

    *The rest of it is scrawled and messy most of it is unreadable. After closely examining the parchment you see elven ingravings on the side, it was recently ripped from a journal, and you come to realize it's remnants of an old oath it reads. To protect the Princedom of Malinor *The rest is unreadable*

    Few people can remember this oath... And me..

    Raven~ *Next to it is a decorated HCSG

    [[The Oath is actually a part of the Laurelin Royal Guard way back in Aegis before we were disbanded, so if want to RP a bit go ahead. HCSG stands for Head Captain of Sythra Guard ]]

  13. Very Impressive, the Lore well put out, Rules are also clearly put out, rank system is quite impressive, and it's purpose just something I have been looking for! So...It's a +1 from me!

    In the future until I attempt to write a VA and get it accepted, I would love to join the 'The Wolf Pack' You done it this time Raptor!

    Bravo :D

  14. MC Name: Maximas1244

    IGN Name: Hooded Paladin/Raven/Maximas [realname]

    Short Bio: Maximas is a skilled warrior. He recently just lost most of his memory's of Aegis, his friends, and all of his memory's of his past. [[Working on it and be posting the full bio on the wiki and everything about my character]]

    Skill / Profession: I'm a Master of Blade and Bow [[swords/Archery 100]]

    Goals: To protect the people of Asulon, to climb through the ranks, trading with other nation handing most of food to poor, to become a better blacksmith [50], learning more ways of Blade and Bow, make new friends, and also get fresh recruits for the Order.

    Timezone: Well I kinda forgot but the best I can give you right now is Australia / NSW [[ New South Wales ]]

    Rp Style: Usually cautious on what I do, I like to make the rp fun and exciting for others. Good rper [[Well I like to think so]] I'm a good pvper but I always do Rp and I do not do any Villianous acts, because I do not have a VA.

  15. [[before reading this, please do not rage or be angry at me for this comment this is in rp and this is what my character feels.]]

    Brothers, Sisters! I'm leaving the White Ravens! For the recent actions that the White Ravens had committed at Elandriel, for nearly causing a war, wanting to kill innocent, this disgust's me. I'll be leaving the White Raven. ~Maximas

  16. [before reading the note, my character isn't actually dead, this is for rp reasons, but this does mean I'm leaving the miltary I might join again also my house has been empty still waiting for the minas XD Also all these actions are just a rumor. Also only certain people know I am alive.]

    *You find a message pinned to the Notice Board, you decide to take a closer look at the note*

    Citizens of Salvus, today is a dark day. For we have lost one of our own, 'Maximas'. At the break of day, Maximas was patrolling the borders of Salvus outside of the village with me 'V'rol', before we were ambushed by a group bandits. [Non existence ] Breaking the laws of Salvus, and refusing arrest, they choose to attack us. Through the heat of the fighting, watching both our backs, and fighting at his side we both knew that we were outnumbered and wouldn't last that much longer, telling me to retreat and get help while he would hold them off.

    Mustering all the help I could find and heading back to assist Maximas, but as soon as I arrived they were already gone, no sign of Maximas but death and lost.There were puddles of blood, shards of metal on the ground and once beautiful green grass now soaked with blood, and his sword shattered into broken pierces laying on the ground covered with small drops of blood and laying next to it the Salvus emblem.

    He died, serving Salvus and it's people. V'rol~ [Talk to V'rol about this]

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