Alurid

((I see no reason why he should live when the rest of the people have died. He should have got out of there when he could. Better to be remembered as a fallen champion of his nation than the champion that died and came back))

((Think about it this way. The love of his Kingdom and his eternally blessed soul for keeping Aegis divine had been resurrected from god knows what since everyone thinks he's dead.))

Huron! No!

But if the medical conditions were not good, how did their babies survive? then so on and so forth.

Look at it this way, there was enough for them to keep them alive for a long while, but not as long as the normal human life.

Is their a reason why they all are dead?

They are all ancestors. At the time, the village didn't provide any medical support. Instead, all of the family died at such a young age. As for the current generation's parents and uncle, you'll just have to wait to find out. :)

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The origins of the Dunn family have remained unknown as information dating 3 generations ago are the only knowledge we know. Legend tells that the village of Kal'Urack came to existence because of Terryn Dunn. Not many know of Kal'Urack as it takes many moons to travel from the Cloud Temple of Aegis to the destroyed city. Very little people lived in Kal'Urack; About 8 families before it was destroyed. Terryn was a very wealthy man who turned away from his envious life in order to start a family away from the public. Married to a very reserved woman who's name remains unknown, Terryn set off to look for land. Purchasing was not an issue as the land was never claimed. The village was named after Terryn's faithful friend, Berlerl Urack. Terryn owed his life to his Dwarven friend. 89 Elven weeks after the village commenced construction, a beautiful baby boy named Athalos was welcomed to the family. As a boy, Athalos hadn't known about his father's wealth. Instead, he grew as a normal boy. He only came to know when his father's life came to an end. At the time, Athalos was age 20 while his father passed away at such young of an age as 43. Athalos could not wait to get his hands on the fortune that awaited him, however, his wife, Cedany, knew Athalos had evil intentions. 5 years later, Athalos left his wife and his newborn child, Hadrian. He believed it would be best for his family, but really, it was because he wanted all of the fortune to himself. His curiosities took him straight to his grave. Cedany knew taking care of Hadrian would take a lot. She began to miss Athalos more and more, even though she hated what he did to her. Their eternal love lasted forever, and so was her death when Hadrian turned 18. Hadrian, in belief that his ancestors were just like his father, knew that the Dunn family needed a change. He left Kal'Urack for 10 years in search of a wife and also families to move into the village. When Hadrian returned. Kal'Urack was thriving with over 24 families of all races and ages. Hadrian's wife Millicent came from a long line of Undead worshippers and she also wished for her family to change. After giving birth to two twins, Ulbridge and Anthrop, Millicenet suffered from memories of her ancestors. The past was catching up to her day by day. One day, when the rest of the family was fast asleep, Millicent grabbed the butcher's knife the family had downstairs and walked up to the childrens' room. The commotion awoke Hadrian. He ran to the childrens' room where he saw Millicent's hand raised, about to slice down upon Anthrop. Hadrian, based on instinct, tackled her to the ground and beheaded her. He knew he committed a crime and decided to hide from the world. He gave the children to the next available family. 9 years later, news broke out to the village that Hadrian had been killed in a cave. The village of Kal'Urack now depended on the lives of two 10 year old boys...

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I am truly sorry to inform you, but you application has not met the expectations of the server. Here are the errors needed to be fixed in your next application:

- Work on your spelling a bit more.

- Some answers I feel you can put more effort into explaining.

- Fix your definition of powergaming and metagaming.

- Work on your biography. It doesn't tell me a lot about your character.

- There are no werewolves in Aegis.

Again, I'm truly sorry that you hadn't been accepted. Please reapply in 48 hours.

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I am truly sorry to inform you, but, your application has been denied. Here are the errors to be fixed in your revised application:

- Fix your grammar and spelling. There are a lot of runon sentences in your biography.

- In your biography, you keep flipping your character's name. (ie. Davethebrave, Brave Dave)

- Your biography doesn't explain much about your character. Your biography should explain main points from your character's birth, to the present.

- The enchanted sword that can "Smite anything" is considered powergaming. Try and reword it.

- The fact that your character randomly found an enchanted sword on the ground is unreistic.

- The 4 races of Aegis do not usually know locations of Nether portals. Try rewording your sentence.

- The skin your provided is very dark and inhumane. I think you should find a more human-like skin.

- And finally, put more effort into all of your answers.

Again, I am truly sorry your application did not get accepted. Please reapply in 48 hours!

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Welcome to Aegis! Please wait for a GM to promote you in-game. Also, voting helps not only the server, but you as well! Besides raising awareness of the server, it will distribute you 100 complimentary Minas. In Aegis, 100 Minas can go a long way! Enjoy Aegis!

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Welcome to Aegis! Please allow some time for a GM to promote you in-game! Pyropuncher fan *high five!*

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I am truly sorry, but, your application has been denied. Please adjust these errors:

- Your sentences could really be fleshed out. I'd like to see much much more effort.

- This server has nothing to do with Lord of the Rings. The only thing that this server borrows is the whole medieval aspect.

- Adding a skin would benefit you. Also, you cannot use the skin of Sauron.

- Your character cannot be a villain until you have applied for a Villain Application. This can only happen when you are in the server itself. This would be considered powergaming.

Please reapply in 48 hours with your improved application.

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Welcome to Aegis! Please allow some time for a GM to promote you in-game! Also, Dwarven age differs from Human age. 24 in Human age would be 240 in Dwarven age. Also, voting does benefit you and the server! Once you vote whilst you are in-game, you will receive 100 complimentary Minas! Those Minas can go a long way. Well anyways, congratulations!

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Sorry, but your application does not reach the expectations of Lord of the Craft. Please improve these errors in your next application:

- 50-55 hours? That seems unrealistic. But if you can play that long, then so be it!

- Fix your definition of metagaming and powergaming. Your powergaming definition was close however.

- YouTube told you it was a great server to join?

- The skin you provided won't fit in with the server. It looks cyborg-ish. It doesn't match the appearance you wrote for your character in your biography.

- I do not understand you backstory. I can't read it because you didn't put spaces after periods. I constantly got lost reading it.

- What was your vote number?

- In your ambitions, you wrote "to bring the order of the paladin and rise the kingdom named lordaeron." Where is he bringing the Order of the Paladin to?

- Work on your sentence structure. I can't tell who's point of view it is as it keeps switching back and forth. For example, in the Other Information section, you wrote "its hard for him to tolerate orcs since they are the ones who killed my parents,friends,and the rest of my village". The point of view switches.

Again, I am truly sorry that your application hadn't been accepted. Please reapply in 48 hours.

Sorry, but your application did not meet the expectations of Lord of the Craft. These are the errors needed to be fixed:

- Expand on your biography. I really need to know the history behind your player. What else does he look like and how does he act?

- There are no saw blades in Lord of the Craft. Perhaps changing it to an axe?

Again, I am truly sorry. Please reapply in 48 hours with your improved application.

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