LeuGeo
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"Astorro says 'What a Fine Day it is Too!May i Browse your inventory?'The Shop keeper begins to show Astorro around, Showing him every shelf of every isle."
There are multiple points that you did wrong, i read through your app multiple times, and i felt that it could do with some improvements. Just check ALL the grammar, and you will probably be accepted tomorrow.