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    [Denied]Roztyve's Player App.

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    Denied.

     

    - Do you agree to the villain rules?

     

    - Please PM me your question with a clearer point, I'm not quite getting it?

     

    - Elaborate and add examples to all your definitions. (Your powergaming definition is wrong.)

     

    - Add one more reference of lore to your biography, saying orcs isn't enough.

     

    - Put more details on your character, work on those personality and skills/weaknesses questions! Pow pow, show us you know your creation!

     

    Reapply after twenty four hours have passed, and PM me with any questions you have. (Also, touch up on your grammar and spelling.  Typing is our main form of communication, you have to be good at it to be a good roleplayer.)

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    [Denied]Application To Join

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    Denied.

     

    - Awh, you need to know what powergaming and metagaming are. You can google it, but make sure to put the definitions in your own words!

     

    - Bae, you can't be half angel, half vampire. You have to be one of the four races, or a sub-type.

     

    - Your biography has no sever lore in it, and it needs another paragraph.

     

    - Elaborate on your personality, skills/weaknesses, and description questions.  Why does getting looked in the eye by a cute guy make her weak? Because she's straight?

     

    Reapply AFTER twenty four hours have passed, and PM me with any questions you have! (You must be pretty amazing to be as amazing as Phil is.)

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    [Denied]Rowanryan Aplication

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    Denied.

     

    - Your definitions are short, add examples and elaborate.

     

    - .. Your biography, although creative, doesn't fit with our lore, PLEASE read our lore, located on the wiki, and try again.

     

    - Your ambitions are pretty ridiculous.

     

    Reapply after twenty four hours, and PM me with your questions.

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    [Denied] Tammyz Application 2

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    Denied.

     

    - Your definitions are /waaayyy/ too short, and lack examples.  Roleplaying isn't always dealing with 'mythical' creatures, and your powergaming definition is wrong. Add examples next time.

     

    - Your character would have to at least be forty to be in Asulon.

     

    - Expand on all of the last few questions after the biography, asides from the skin one.

     

    Reapply after twenty four hours have passed, and PM me with your questions.

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