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  1. _Bueno_

    thunder_hybrid

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Character Biography states that Dracul was abandoned by his parents in the jungle at age 5. How did he survive? How was he able to train himself? I'd like for you to rewrite your biography to the best of your ability in order to explain and enrich Dracul's backstory with these questions in mind. Your Character Biography states that Dracul is loyal to the Empire, what gave him this loyalty? It seems like you suggest he's detached from civilization. What provides him the connection to society? Again, I'd like you to evaluate these questions in a biography rewrite. Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. Your Character Fear Response should tie into your character’s personality traits. Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please make it more concise and narrow it down. Please define what roleplay means. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/lotc
  2. _Bueno_

    thunder_hybrid

    Changed Status to Under Review
  3. _Bueno_

    Just_Aias

    Changed Status to Denied
  4. _Bueno_

    Just_Aias

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one! Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks. Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person! Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response ties into your Character Biography! Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
  5. _Bueno_

    De1uxee

    Changed Status to Pending
  6. _Bueno_

    Just_Aias

    Changed Status to Under Review
  7. _Bueno_

    De1uxee

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Character Biography states that Kai's family was killed by bandits. This trope is a bit overdone and I'd encourage you to elaborate on your backstory. Please think on how to thoughtfully create alternative ways to develop Kai's character. Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. "Can be mean to people" should be elaborated on. What drives that? Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/lotc
  8. _Bueno_

    De1uxee

    Changed Status to Under Review
  9. _Bueno_

    CptnDarkwater

    Changed Status to Accepted
  10. _Bueno_

    CptnDarkwater

    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC! To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way! Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
  11. _Bueno_

    CptnDarkwater

    Changed Status to Pending
  12. _Bueno_

    CptnDarkwater

    Changed Status to Under Review Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/lotc
  13. _Bueno_

    AG_PLAYS

    Changed Status to Denied
  14. _Bueno_

    AG_PLAYS

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one! Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person! Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. Your Character Name is not appropriate for LotC. Please change it! Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it! Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response! Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
  15. _Bueno_

    AG_PLAYS

    Changed Status to Under Review
  16. _Bueno_

    Morenea

    Changed Status to Denied
  17. _Bueno_

    Morenea

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Roleplay Scenario includes references to things against our server rules and has been deemed inappropriate. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
  18. _Bueno_

    Morenea

    Changed Status to Pending
  19. _Bueno_

    Morenea

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/lotc
  20. _Bueno_

    Morenea

    Changed Status to Under Review
  21. _Bueno_

    Jacuumb

    Changed Status to Accepted
  22. _Bueno_

    Jacuumb

    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC! To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way! Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
  23. _Bueno_

    jessygr

    Changed Status to Denied
  24. _Bueno_

    jessygr

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? Your Character Biography states that you were born into the "king's elite group." You'd need explicit permission from said king in order to add that into your backstory. Please use a more lore-appropriate backstory Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography. Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one! Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person! Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
  25. _Bueno_

    jessygr

    Changed Status to Under Review
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