thesaintjaleel

I think this is good, not too overpowered not too underpowered. I give my +1

22 hours ago, Original_Potato said:

Oh, errr, I'm sorry- didn't mean to like get you out of this or anything. The thing is a young child does not have a fully developed brain, and likely not the capacity to learn, understand and retain such knowledge yet.

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This is arguable, it has been proven that children learn things quicker than adults due to adults functional fixedness. You can look it up if you really want to. 

2 minutes ago, ShameJax said:

Make this application in that month then! Having an application fulfills the procedure of the first steps of it, not the prerequisites. Perhaps have this moved to pending?

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If you insist then, I'm not really sure how to switch the topics.

15 minutes ago, Original_Potato said:

A 5 or younger year old child learnt enough alchemical skills to create life four years later?

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I made it clear to everyone, including the Lore team that he was really young and I was told it was alright. Given that his father was an Alchemist and he's a Bryophite that uses Alchemy in his everyday life I felt that it would be good that in a month or so(Which I note that IRP is about 5 years) He'd have enough under his belt to do this. I don't see how 7 years of Alchemy wouldn't total to being able to create something that all Alchemists dream of.

You both need to consider that a self teaching application doesn't mean they automatically get to do what they are self taught, it actually involves the NEED to be self taught which takes sometime and in this case, would take atleast 5 years.I have no idea why you're going back on your word but I think you should reconsider, simply because Alchemy has become his life. It wouldn't make sense for someone who has alchemy as a 2nd-rate skill but Jhazeem uses Alchemy every day, he's even managed to become a court medic and use his alchemy knowledge to heal people.

5 minutes ago, ShameJax said:

To be honest I actually didn't notice that. I'll have to retract my overseeing this for now. When the character gets older I'm willing to oversee self teaching, however this character is far too young. Apologies for any inconvenience, @Alitruist

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MC Name: Alitruist

Character's Name: Jhazeem the Flowerboy

Character's Age: 18

Character's Race: Bryophite 

What magic(s) will you be learning?: Advanced Alchemy : Homunculi Creation

Link a MA of a magic your character already uses that is in the same archetype as the magic you are self teaching: N/A

How did you learn this magic(s)?: On Axios, Jhazeems Father had taught him Alchemy for about 2 years, and even allowed him to assist in the creation of a Fiend. After Jhazeems father died, he continued Alchemy in his every day life, using its laws to survive. Although young, he harnessed a love and admiration for Alchemy. As a Bryophite, he'd use the materials of his body to create things. Too young to become a druid, he found Alchemy as one of his only purposes in life and made it his personal goal to achieve Takwin. Jhazeem read a lot, as reading was one of the only skills he had mastered at his young age. Although he knew of the basic features of Alchemy such as Equivalent Exchange, he always felt there was more to it, so he read  to better his knowledge. Although he found it disturbing, he found the creation of Homunculi to be an excellent transformation and/or way to reach Takwin, and began to collect materials that he deemed "Perfect" to complement each other for whenever he found a candidate. In his pursuit to create a new life, something he'd rather refer to as "Remaking" he eventually held the knowledge, ingredients, and will to create a Homunculus.

MC name of OOC overseer (Note: they must either have a TA in this magic on any character or be a member of the MT):ShameJax

Offer an explanation of the magic(s) you are learning: Homonculi creation is one of the many Alchemist attempts at reaching Takwin, the creation of new life. It is the process of taking a mortal body, living or unliving, willing or unwilling(Although they would need to willingly PK their character OOCly) and forming it into either an Animal, or a creature of perfection. This is not random, it depends primarily on the materials used and the knowledge of the Alchemist performing the procedure. Once the procedure is done, it would have created a chaotic, soulless creature of Alchemy that is incapable of being good/purely aligned(unable to do good). If they do good, it is either because they are tricked, it is unintentional, or that  they hold an ulterior motive. It is possible that the Homunculi created, no matter the tier they are, are symbolized by a certain element that they hold pro's and cons with. For instance, a Fire-Symbol Homunculus would now drown easier, and have an inept weakness to cold and water as a whole and a Air-Symbol Homunculus would now be weak against heat and flame, and even be susceptible to combust. They get the symbol depending on what ingredients were used to create them. Regardless of this, ALL Homunculi are weak against Holy magic and gold, such as an undead would be. Homunculi are unable to cast spells, as they are soulless. The 4 stages of a Homunculus are Fiend, Deviant, Aberrant, and Doppelganger. A fiend is a greatly failed, greatly disfigured attempt at a Homunculus, they are not strong, not smart, and are HEAVILY deformed; they are unable to wear armor and only live for 3-4 IRL days.  A Deviant is created from a corpse, more-less a failed attempt at resurrection and ends up having many mutations and problems, they can live for 1-2 IRL months and don't require a PK on death, as their body reforms inside of the abyss. The Aberrant are the lesser forms of their Doppelganger relatives, they also forget their memories on creation and are  quite imperfect. Doppelganger requires a OOC acceptance of a PK and only have an unnatural skin color, they have greater strength and knowledge and hold some skills of their previous character; they possess a soul-shadow and only live for about 1 IRL year, and don't require a PK on death as their body reforms in the Abyss. The Doppelganger is the most perfect Homunculi, they also require a person to PK on creation and  doesn't show any deformations and look exactly like they did before their transformation. They have no blood, and will excrete whichever liquid they were formed from. Although being killed doesn't require a PK, if they go inactive without the proper 'preservation methods' they will be forced to PK, with a warning before they do. They are the longest lived Homunculi, holding the same lifespan of the race they were derived from and on rare cases, even longer. Even if born into the lesser forms, a Homunculi can seek perfection through Ascension, rising in the tiers through persistent efforts towards satisfaction although they are required to learn about the successive tier through another Homunculi' transformation.

Provide evidence you've a proper means of learning this magic(s): N/A 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: N/A

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?: Yes.

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: No.

This is quite wrong, and also I don't have an FA accepted yet as needed.

Jhazeem receives a flyer taped to his home in Haense and says : "Humans have such problems."

I have this problem too, I bid 82 on an item, then 20 on 2 others..They all we're outbid and the money wasn't returned to me, not even in my bank.I am still having this issue without the minas in my possession, It was around 7pm  12/27 when I was outbid  and about 4pm 12/25 when I bid.

My first application was denied because I was using outdated Bryophite information provided in the wiki, if you want to update that information I'm sure it'd be easier to apply 

MC Name:

Alitruist

Character's Name:

Jhazeer

Character's Age:

7

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

Wood Elf

Transformed form:

Bryophite

Creator's MC Name:N/A

Creator's RP Name: N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Bryophites are creatures that were originally interceded  from Cerridwen, but are now created from a  races interaction with plant called The Veridian Moss(Which was created from the flesh of the first Bryophite). They are a race that can reproduce(although pregnancy lasts longer) , but can not learn voidal magic.They hold the ability to grow plants from their body(unwillingly), as their body was transformed into a plant's entirely; They also carry Carbon Dioxide instead of Oxygen in their blood stream. Bryophites are Omnivores, although it isn't uncommon for eating habits to change post-transformation. If they are cut off from sunlight, they will grow unhealthy but not die. They have the ability to release poison spores that numbs an enemies body. They are susceptible to fire and frost(coldness). They can also regrow their limbs.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:N/A

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:Yes.

Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:Yes.

Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:Yes.

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

MC Name :

Alitruist

Character's Name:

Jhazem

Character's Age:

7

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

Wood Elf

Transformed form:

Bryophite

Creator's MC Name:N/A

Creator's RP Name:N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature: Bryophites are people previously of the mortal race, transformed into a unhurtable, unsmart being via a parasitic plant(verridian moss) . During their phase, they are sent into a deep sleep while the plant takes over its body and replaces all of the persons natural parts into vegetation. After transformation, the person becomes weak to fire and coldness, inherits a better understanding to nature, unable to learn voidal magic, able to grow plants from their body, tameable, and can transmit spores from their own body at will to calm them down, help the regenerate, or help them sleep.They breath Carbon Dioxide instead of Oxygen, 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: N/A

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?: Yes.

Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?: Yes.

Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

 Yes.

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: No.

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Aliardi

What timezone are you in?:EST

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:"Proper rp is required before PvP can be called. The roleplay must be initiated and properly advance to conflict before it goes to PvP. "

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Friends

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is the act of playing a role , usually a role not associated with who you are as a person in real life for fun or other reasons.

What is metagaming?:Giving your character information about roleplay that you learned out of character for your own personal benefit or the benefit of others.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Forcing your will on a person , place , or thing without adding realism (Ex : Shoots arrow at Jason and hits him in the heart so he dies)

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Aliard Evolasti

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Wood Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)81

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born in a civilized city close to the southern forests of Axios  his father a Veteran Guard and scoutsman of the forest and his mother a studier of the first woodland druid Malin,she desired to become a druid also often hearing of a woman druid Elorna , but her dream was short lived. he was not very close to his mother seeing that she died while he was only 10 years old(Giving birth to his brother).Aliard often climbed trees and loved to play Scout , he did not have many friends like him so he sometimes played with himself(pls no like that) climbing the trees and jumping and hopping around , he often went from home...He often resented his brother , he blamed him for the death of his mother and being the youngest , he was always given more attention than Aliard , rather than that he loves his brother and would do anything to protect him and supports him in whatever he does.Some of the elves began to cut down the trees , building homes such as the humans did , his father followed their lead also.He hated it , and sometimes would cry for all the trees being cut down .At the age of 19 , his father died protecting the now large city which was also infested with wood elves who were betraying the tale of the 2 gods (Cerridwen and Cernunnos) and following the beliefs of the dark elves..He often got in arguments with hisb rother over this because his brother wanted to follow in the steps of his father , saving the city , but he did the opposite and stole from the city for a living often noting that the city was the reason that they were living in poverty without a mother and father  . Him in hisbrother lost connection for 3 years , his brother attempting to sign up as a scout and him stealing for a living and finding remnants of Forest that he could live in and furthermore protect , they met on the opposing sides.Jason(His brother)  had captured him (He was more stronger than Aliard and had a lot of training in the city) , although Aliard was much more faster and knew how to climb and hide ).He did not lock him up , changing his mind afterwards , after a near death experience Jason had left the city and went with his brother., To be continued ingame)

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)He is Passive Aggressive , he is  loyal , he shows no remorse , he puts reason over emotion , He dislikes humans ,

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)The Greatest Archer in the Woodlands

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)Archery , Parkour(He can climb trees and has a light foot while on ground), Crafting (He crafted his own clothes , his own bow , and his shoes) , Tracking ( He has great eye sight and can track a bears footpints to its exact location or atleast nearby)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)He is anti-social and passive aggressive , He would value the life of a woodland creature over the lives of the races(disincluding his brother) , HE dislikes speaking , HE is traditional(Is not used to advanced technology)He is unloyal (An oppurtunist , only loyal to his brother)

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)He Has brown hair , as brown skin similar to the color of the trees of the woodlands he used to live , he wears a green and brown suit to show his loyalty to the woodlands of his area , average height of a woodelf , shorter than a human

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)http://prntscr.com/ezlx00