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  1. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Mihiro Watanabe

     

    Character's Age:

             25

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Alchemy

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             Moon_Is_Innocent

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Akemi Watanabe

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes I agree

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  2. Unlike Evo said it sounds theoretically powerful, but because under the redlines it says it doesn't cause harm most people just power through it with only a few people freaking out. In my experience it's been primarily used to attempt to freak people out long enough for a blood mage to slip away from a situation or to take revenge on annoying relatives.

    In all honesty it could be a little stronger so if you are using it to freak people out to get away you aren't just relying on the others around you to rply react to it, but you know that's just my humble opinion.  

  3. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Han Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             111

     

    Character's Race:

             Elf/Proto Elf

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Air Evocation

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             ECS1999

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Idril Ashwood

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, that you may no longer use it in character?

             Yes I am aware

  4. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Chen Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             103

     

    Character's Race:

             Elf/Proto Elf

     

    Link to your accepted MA:

             https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/205197-fire-evocation-ma-bemoblue/?tab=comments#comment-1863486

     

    What magic(s) will you be teaching?

             Fire Evocation

     

    Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

             

     Voidal magic is the harnessing of voidal energy in the form of mana to be used to perform various feats of magic. During the connection process a voidal mage will awaken their abilities and connection to the void by effectively making a small voidal tear in their soul. By pulling energy from the void and say for example being a pyromancer or fire evocationist would imagine flame, and picture its properties in order to transform the energy into flame. 

     

    However practicing the voidal arts does not come free of issues, as all long term mages suffer from voidal poisoning which weakens their bodies. Making them too weak to hold large weapons.  

     

    As for voidal fire itself it reacts to the world much in the same way mundane fire would, however the initially made voidal fire can not be maintained, and will disappear when the mage’s concentration ends, however any fires caused by it will continue as mundane fires.

     

    Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

             

    Other subsects of voidal magic include Earth evocation, Air evocation, Water evocation, conjuration or life evocation, translocation and transfiguration. Most evocations being the same in the sense it is the use of voidal energy changed into an Element. Whilst conjuration is mana being concentrated into the form of an animal for brief durations. Translocation being the use of voidal portals, whilst transfiguration is the practice of enchantments.

     

    Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    Conjure Fire - (1 to contect, 1 to cast)

    (Connect)

    Wenping closed his eyes, as he established connection. A saffron mist began to swirl about his left hand. As he opened his eyes he’d reveal eyes with a soft yellow glow. The man held out a hand as he began to picture the flickering of flame in the form of a flower. 

    (Cast)

    Suddenly a small flame flickered to life in the palm of his hand. Bursting forth into the form of a lilly engulfed in flame, fiery petals shimmering casting a dim but warm light in the room.

     

    Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    (Flame Trial)

    [Connecting Emote]

    “Now the lesson of today will be a flame trial, it is of vital importance that you focus lest you or I get injured.” Wenping would say to his student. He then held out a hand, his eyes lighting up with a soft yellow glow, as he began to connect to the void.

     [Charging Emote]

    He let a small flame spring to life in the palm of his hand, as he began envisioning the direction in which he wished the flame to go. 

    [Charging Emote]

    The Elf cast the trail in a direct line in front of him, a small line of tiny flame barely the size of a candle. About four meters in length. 

    [Effects and full casting Emote]

    As he continued to focus the wall of flames grew from a tiny line of candles to a wall of flame a meter high which flickered and danced on the stone floor of the courtyard. 

    Wenping stepped back admiring his handy work, his shoulders tense from the fear of the heat of the flame. 

    “Now it’s your turn. Be sure to picture the shape and height of the flame trail you wish to create.”  The Elf reminded his student. 

     

    Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

             

    If a student powergames, as perusal with any magic, it should be pointed out and corrected as soon as seen or notified. If the student corrects themselves all is right with the world. However if the student continues to powerd game, in spite of three or four warnings from me. I will have to inform a lore team member so further action can be taken. 

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

             No

  5. MC Name:

             CluedoBluedo

     

    Character's Name:

             Sulier Elassidil

     

    Character's Age:

             44

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Corcitura

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             Capn_Avery

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Vukosav

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes I agree

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is undergoing an activity trial and fails said trial, that you will lose the feat? And that if it is apart of the Lore Games, it might drastically change soon?:

             Yes

     

  6. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Chen Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             86

     

    Character's Race:

             Elf/Proto Elf

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Translocation

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             EdenCringe

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Nimue

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, that you may no longer use it in character?

             Yes I am aware

  7. -+-

    Year of The Warrior
    -=~+~=-

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    19th Saturday 8pm EST- Opening Ceremony 

    [Social Event]

    Drinks at the tea house, food and a celebration. Come have a good time with your friends as we announce the contests for the week.

     

    20th Sunday 7pm EST- Free for All

    [PvP Event]

    Bring your armor and weapons for a good old fashioned free for all. Last one standing gets two stacks of iron, a stack of leather and 200 mina. Sign-ups are the day of! 

     

    21st Monday 7pm EST- Round one of the Round Robin

    [CRP Event]

    First set of the Round Robins, individuals not involved in said fights may bet on contestants to earn minas. Only eight spots; sign up required beforehand, sign up sheets and explanation will be at the bottom of the missive.

     

    22nd Tuesday 7pm EST - Round 2 of the Round Robin

    [CRP Event]

    Winners from the first Round Robin will be paired against each other. Who will advance to the final round?

     

    23rd Wednesday 7pm EST- Finals of the Round Robin

    [CRP Event]

    Last two contestants fight until the other can no longer stand. Winner will take home the prize. As with the first two, those not participating may bet on contestants. The prize being 300 mina along with a magical staff from the ice caves behind Yong Ping.

     

    24th Thursday 8pm EST- Archery Contest

    [CRP/Rolls Event]

    Are you a talented archer? Wish to show off your skills? Archery contest on Thursday, sign up sheet will be provided on the day and there will be limited spots, first come first serve. Winner walks away with an authentic Oyashiman Yumi for the event and 100 Mina.

     

    25th Friday 7pm EST- Closing Ceremony

    [Social Event]

    Have a drink and a laugh with your friends as the year comes to a close! Food and drinks shall be provided at the tea house, as well as performances by the locals. 




    Sign up sheet for Round Robin:
    IGN:
    RP Name:
    Discord:

     

    [!] Flyers for the event have been posted all around Almaris, on every notice board.

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    An ornate scroll, plated within a case with golden-lotus detailing is delivered via Retainer, the individual in question coming to a kneel before Ishikawa Akihiko to deliver the piece. Only upon acceptance, would they rise and leave soon after. If they should choose to unravel the scroll, it'd reveal lotus-scented rice-paper, golden-edged stationery along the edges and the words in scrawling calligraphy.

    By order of the Zhu,

    Chen Wenping

    By the authority of the Zhu, Chen Wenping, the Ishikawa Household has been gifted the right of nobility, under that of the Jade State of Yong Ping. Upon the receiving of this letter, the head of household Ishikawa Akihiko holds the tentative title of Danshaku. This title is hereditary and will pass onto one such Ishikawa Akihikos heir of the Household. From this point, you are given one Dragons week to come before me within the Senate room to accept and swear that of an oath. Upon this swearing of the Oath, you have the rights and privileges of nobility, alongside the duties and responsibilities that come with such a title.

    May we, as the Jade State, ever prosper.

    “No mud, no lotus.”

     


     

    Chen Wenping, the third Patriarch of Yong Ping, The Zhu of the Jade State of Yong Ping, Gong and Patriarch of the Chen Household, former Chancellor, former Minister of Justice,.

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    An ornate scroll, plated within a case with golden-lotus detailing is delivered via Retainer, the individual in question coming to a kneel before Ishikawa Akihiko to deliver the piece. Only upon acceptance, would they rise and leave soon after. If they should choose to unravel the scroll, it'd reveal lotus-scented rice-paper, golden-edged stationery along the edges and the words in scrawling calligraphy.

    By order of the Zhu,

    Chen Wenping

    By the authority of the Zhu, Chen Wenping, the Ishikawa Household has been gifted the right of nobility, under that of the Jade State of Yong Ping. Upon the receiving of this letter, the head of household Ishikawa Akihiko holds the tentative title of Danshaku. This title is hereditary and will pass onto one such Ishikawa Akihikos heir of the Household. From this point, you are given one Dragons week to come before me within the Senate room to accept and swear that of an oath. Upon this swearing of the Oath, you have the rights and privileges of nobility, alongside the duties and responsibilities that come with such a title.

    May we, as the Jade State, ever prosper.

    “No mud, no lotus.”

     


     

    Chen Wenping, the third Patriarch of Yong Ping, The Zhu of the Jade State of Yong Ping, Gong and Patriarch of the Chen Household, former Chancellor, former Minister of Justice,.

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    An ornate scroll, plated within a case with golden-lotus detailing is delivered via Retainer, the individual in question coming to a kneel before Watanabe Akemi to deliver the piece. Only upon acceptance, would they rise and leave soon after. If they should choose to unravel the scroll, it'd reveal lotus-scented rice-paper, golden-edged stationery along the edges and the words in scrawling calligraphy.

    By order of the Prosperous Zhu,

    Chen Wenping

    By the authority of the Zhu, Chen Wenping, the Watanabe Household has been gifted the right of nobility, under that of the Jade State of Yong Ping. Upon the receiving of this letter, the head of household Watanabe Akemi holds the tentative title of Shishaku. This title is hereditary and will pass onto one such Watanabe Akemi heir of the Household. From this point, you are given one Dragons week to come before me within the Senate room to accept and swear that of an oath. Upon this swearing of the Oath, you have the rights and privileges of nobility, alongside the duties and responsibilities that come with such a title.

    May we, as the Jade State, ever prosper.

    “No mud, no lotus.”

     


    Chen Wenping, the third Patriarch of Yong Ping, The Zhu of the Jade State of Yong Ping, Gong and Patriarch of the Chen Household, former Chancellor, former Minister of Justice.

    陈  文平

     

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  11. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Chen Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             76

     

    Character's Race:

             Elf/Proto Elf

     

    Link to your accepted MA:

             https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/203988-blood-magic-ma-bemoblue/

     

    What magic(s) will you be teaching?

             Blood Magic

     

    Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

             

     

     The ancient art of blood magic, though it used to be far more powerful, spent a brief time in dark ignorance after the influence of Malghourn. These days blood magic was relearned primarily through the Siliti, but it’s original origins are as a whole unknown.

     

    Bloodmagics primary source, much like mana to voidal mages, is the energy found within blood known as Genus. Genus can be put to practise through use of runes and runic circles, generally involving complex rituals depending on the desired effect. Blood used in these rituals has to be fresh (Meaning blood gathered for a ritual can not be older than 3 ooc hours) and typically come from a descendant or creature which possesses a soul. Animals do not possess the vital ingredient genus and thus their blood can not be used in rituals.

    As stated before different descendants and creatures possess different amounts of genus within them, amounts generally being counted in units. For example a regular descendant only has 3 units of genus, whilst a High Elf will possess 4, as do voidal mages and epiphytes. Creatures such as Azdrazi and Frost Witches possess 5 units, whilst Siliti have a total of 6. After loss of genus after being bled a victim or blood mage may feel fatigue and the effects of blood loss but the more they lose the worse it will get. If a victim is emptied of genus they will fall unconscious due to shock and blood loss and expire shortly thereafter if not helped.

    The amount of genus used will depend heavily on the ritual, most rituals usually taking more than one blood mage to perform. As most rituals typically become safer to perform the more blood mages you have, and the higher tier said blood mages are. For every Silit involved in a ritual +1 can be added to the roll of a ritual by an ST +2 for every 4th and 5th tier blood mage, and finally a +1 for every 2nd and 3rd tier blood mage. What this means is say a ritual of Quiet is performed by five blood mages, one of which is a tier 5 siliti, two tier 5 blood mages, and two tier 2 apprentices, when the ST goes to roll they would be adding a +9 to the roll. 

     

    All rituals require use of runes, most runes with the exception of blood magic's blood bending abilities. In terms of the types of rituals a blood mage can perform there are creation, summoning, elemental and force rituals. Creation rituals revolve mostly around creating new objects through blood magic, or creating silence. Summoning is fairly obvious. Elemental rituals heavily involve the use of elemental runes to perform rituals such as Ensorcell Flesh and are usually used for more aesthetic purposes, though ensorcell material can have some combat effects. Finally Force rituals are the most varied in their uses and utilizing force runes can do anything from keeping a voidal spell unwavering in its existence to sealing over wounds. 

     

    Long term use of blood magic does cause irreparable damage to the body, shortening the blood mage’s lifespan to 2 irl years if their natural life span would be longer, as well as does psychological damage to the user. Their body will become more prone to disease, and be washed of it’s colour. Naturally due to blood magic’s nature it can only be learned by those who possess genus, so atronachs, sorvians, ghosts, liches and golems and the like. 

     

    Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

             

    N/A

     

    Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    The edge of Wenping’s kaiken bit into his palm as he sliced the blade across his hand. Once enough blood had sufficiently collected in his palm he’d dip his finger in the ichor, using it to paint the ritual circle on the ground. Scribing the Rune for mortality within the circle and the rune of fire in the upper right crescent of said mortality rune.

    Wenping then dripped two measures of blood onto the circle. Once completed the Elf placed the spear over the rune of fire, before stepping back. He then knelt down by the circle, pressing his bloodied hand upon the outer line of the ritual.  As the activation of the circle began, the blood on the floor came to life with a dim glow.

    (Assuming the roll is good and the ritual is successful) 

    As the ritual came to a close, the spear on the ground began to sizzle with glowing ember like veins showing the ritual to be a success.

     

    Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    “To begin with I am going to teach you the simple ability of scabbing. It can be used to seal over wounds, and generally clean up after performing rituals. It is of  vital importance to quickly and efficiently clean up after rituals to keep our art a secret.” Wenping explained to his student, as he hovered the blade of his kaiken over his palm. “Now for the sake of learning to perform this ritual, make a shallow cut across your palm. And don’t stab yourselves, this ability can’t save you from death, it merely stops bleeding if the cut is shallow and non fatal.”
    He’d cut open a small wound on his palm, holding it up for his students to see. “Now normally we would likely end up with injuries like this from performing ritual rites, now if you just place your hand over your wound and focus.” The Elf placed his hand over the wound.

    A small red mist began to form about the cut as it sealed over into a fresh scab. 

     

    Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

             

    If one of my students power games first I will point out exactly what it is they are power gaming, how they power gamed and then explain the limits of that particular blood magic ritual or ability. Hopefully the student will correct their behavior, as everyone has slip ups when they start something new or perform a task they have never done. 

    If they continue to power game, then it might be a matter of reporting them to a lore team member but hopefully and ideally it won’t come to that. 

           

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

             No


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    An ornate scroll, plated within a case with golden-lotus detailing is delivered via Retainer, the individual in question coming to a kneel before Tianrui Ren  to deliver the piece. Only upon acceptance, would they rise and leave soon after. If they should choose to unravel the scroll, it'd reveal lotus-scented rice-paper, golden-edged stationery along the edges and the words in scrawling calligraphy.

     

    By order of the Zhu,

    Chen Wenping

    By the authority of the Zhu, Chen Wenping, the Tianrui household has been gifted the right of nobility, under that of the Jade State of Yong Ping. Upon the receiving of this letter, the head of household Tianrui Ren  holds the tentative title of Gong. This title is hereditary and will pass onto one such Tianrui Rens heir of the Household. From this point, you are given one Dragons week to come before me within the Senate room to accept and swear that of an oath. Upon this swearing of the Oath, you have the rights and privileges of nobility, alongside the duties and responsibilities that come with such a title.

    May we, as the Jade State, ever prosper.

    “No mud, no lotus.”

     


    Chen Wenping, the third Patriarch of Yong Ping, The Zhu of the Jade State of Yong Ping, Gong and Patriarch of the Chen Household, former Chancellor, former Minister of Justice, and local playwright.

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  13. Yong Ping Tea House Quiz

     

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    Come one, come all to the Yong Ping Tea House Quiz Night. Three categories, five questions each category, save the last which has four. Is there a prize for winning this inscrutable battle of the intellects? You can put that question to rest with 200 mina for the winning team. Teams may have a maximum of four members. 

     

    Categories 

    Yong Ping History

    Common Knowledge

    Wenping

     

    Generously invited by Chen Wenping himself

     

    When? 8 PM EST 6th of the 1st 

     

    (OOC P.S.: To make things fair the last category won’t actually be counted. I just did it for fun, but you will still have to answer the questions to complete the quiz.)

  14. The Official Yong Ping Legal System

     


     

     

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    To ensure a well balanced and fair justice system within the Jade State of Yong Ping, and the previous laws being not only outdated, but also not regulated in respect to the new Jade Constitution, a new court system in addition to newly revised laws will be integrated in order to ensure the security and prosperity within the borders of the Jade State of Yong Ping. 

     

    Under enforcement of this newly revised legal code, lesser crimes committed against the laws of the Jade State of Yong Ping are to be dealt with by on the spot issuing of punishment by an Officer of the Yong Ping Army. An Officer issuing punishment may prior to issuing punishment seek legal advice from a Judge or Lawyer, however this is not necessary.

     

    The aforementioned method of punishment and criminal identification may only be carried out and issued if the committed crime has been witnessed by three or more people. If the individual who has been issued a punishment by an Officer of the Yong Ping Army feels they have been wrongly accused or that their case was handled unfairly, they can place a complaint to the Ministry of Justice to receive reparations or an appellate Court date if it is found to be necessary. 

     

    The following laws and regulations are directly tied to a point system, whereby the rights and privileges of convicted individuals can be affected by how many crimes one has committed and the degree of the crime to ensure the safety of further citizens of the Jade State of Yong Ping. All citizens of the jade state will have a record kept of the points tied to their name, age and address. 

     

    Furthermore, if any individual wishes to rehabilitate themselves and not suffer the consequences of their actions after the issued punishment, a system for the removal of points has been introduced. 

     

    To distinguish minor offenders from major and criminal offenders, the following regulations and laws are organized into three different subtypes.

     

    Minor crimes: 1 point added to the file of the individual (Are typically punished by fines or beatings)

    Intermediate crimes: 2 points added to the file of the individual (Typical punishments brandings, beatings or fines)

    Severe crimes: 3 points added to the file of the individual (Brandings, fines and/or non-lethal removal or organs or limbs) 

    Variable crimes: Those that would be deemed treasonous, or possibly automatically five points. But can be contended by the Council. (Almost always execution or exile but may vary case by case and is determined by Chancellor or Zhu)



     

    Number of Points

    Consequences

    Cost of Removal

    1 Point

    A warning

    100 mina or a year of working for the state

    2 Points 

    No longer able to gain a position as Minister

    200 mina or a two years of working for the state

    3 Points 

    No longer able to hold or gain a position in any ministry. Relegated to the lower districts.

    300 mina or three years of working for the state and a public statement of apology 

    4 Points 

    Confiscation of all property both private and business related 

    Unable to be removed save by pardon of Zhu or the Chancellor

    5 Points

    Execution/Banishment

    Unable to be removed save Pardon from the Zhu




     

    Crimes Against the Individual 

     

    Impersonation - 

    • Maofan Nng: The act of one individual imitating another individual of the common folk, for nefarious and unlawful purposes. 

    • Maofan Jit: The act of one individual imitating another individual of State or Military rank. This may be considered as treasonous action depending on the rank impersonated. 

    Attempted Assault -

    • Maofan Sa: The attempted harm or injury of another individual through methods of an unarmed nature.

    • Maofan Nng: The attempted harm or injury of another individual through methods involving a weapon. 

    Assault -

    • Maofan Sa: The act of physically attacking a person, which results in no permanent damage to the attacked individual. 

    • Maofan Nng: The act of physically attacking a person, which results in lasting damage to the attacked individual.

    • Maofan Jit: The act of physically attacking a person, which results in permanent damage to the attacked individual. 

    Kidnapping -

    • Maofan Nng: The intentional and willful abduction, confining and chaining or otherwise restraining of another individual without actually causing any physical harm to said person.

    • Maofan Jit: The intentional and willful abduction, confining and chaining or otherwise restraining of another individual, which leads to unintentional physical harm to said person.

    • Maofan Jit: The intentional and willful of abduction, confining and chaining or otherwise restraining another individual, with intention to physically harm said person, or having intentionally caused harm to said individual. 

    Mutilation -

    • Maofan Sa: The act of removing teeth, fingers, toes, eyes or tongue of an individual through negligence. 

    • Maofan Nng: The act of knowingly and willfully removing teeth, fingers, toes, eyes or tongue of an individual or through negligence removing limbs and organs or otherwise doing permanent damage to another individual. 

    • Maofan Jit: The act of knowingly and willfully removing limbs, organs or otherwise doing permanent damage to another individual. 

    Torture -

    • Maofan Nng: The act of individuals not authorized by the council performing long lasting and willing physical damage and torment to another individual over an extended period of time. 

    • Maofan Jit: The act of individuals not authorized by the council performing permanent and willing physical damage and torment to another individual over an extended period of time

    Manslaughter - 

    • Maofan Sa: The taking of the life of another through pure negligence or accident, with no premeditated plans or intentions for the death of the deceased individual. 

    • Murder - 

    • Maofan Sa: The act of taking an individual’s life in the heat of the moment, either as a result of coercion, threats to the individual taking the life, or high strung emotional passions. 

    • Maofan Nng: The act of willingly taking the life of another without individual cause or premeditation.

    • Maofan Jit: The act of willingly planning out, and conducting the taking of the life of another individual. 


     

    Crimes Against Decency

     

    Slander-

    • Maofan Sa: The willful spreading of false information, about an individual/company without intent to harm the person/company’s reputation or standing within the greater community.

    • Maofan Nng: The willful spreading of false information, about an individual or company without intent to harm the reputation or standing of said company through pictorial means, or written word.

    • Maofan Jit: The willful and purposeful spreading of false information about an individual company with direct intent to harm their reputation and standing within the wider community through word of mouth, print or pictorial means.  

    Disturbing the Peace - 

    • Maofan Sa: The unintentional disruption of the daily routines of the people of Yong Ping through upsetting, violent, crude or deplorable displays.

    • Maofan Nng: The intentional disruption of the daily routines of the people of Yong Ping through upsetting, violent, crude or deplorable displays.

    Incitement-

    • Maofan Sa: The convincing or manipulation of making other individuals to commit crime. 

    Resisting Arrest -

    • Maofan Sa: The individual has attempted to run or obscure themselves from the YPA (Yong Ping Army), or other state authority figures after having had a warrant issued for their arrest or been placed under arrest. 

    • Maofan Nng: The individual has attempted to avoid arrest, and or punishment by the YPA (Yong Ping Army), or other state authority figures by violent means. 

    • Discrimination -

    • Maofan Sa: Any discriminatory, verbal or physical action taken against an individual on the grounds of their race, descendant or otherwise, culture, preference of partner or gender. This does not include on the grounds of religion or individuals of an undead or tainted nature. 

    Deviancy -

    • Maofan Sa: One or more individuals performing acts in public which would be considered indecent, or not appropriate for the general public. 

    Adultery -

    •  Maofan Sa: The action of an already wed individual, copulating with someone who is not their spouse, without the knowledge and/or expressed consent of said spouse.

    Prohibited Goods -

    • Maofan Sa: The willful possession of any illegal substances, literature or items found on someone's person, and/or in their abode. 

    • Maofan Nng: The willful selling and or distribution of illegal substances, literature and/or items.  

    • Maofan Jit: The willful cultivation and manufacturing of illegal substances, literature and/or items.


     

    Crimes Against Property 

     

    Vandalism -

    • Maofan Sa: Unintentionally defacing, or destroying public and or private property. 

    • Maofan Nng: Intentional defacing, or destroying public and or private property. 

    Trespassing - 

    • Maofan Sa: The unlawful act of entering an abode, private plot or residence without the expressed permission of the owner. 

    Squatting -

    • Maofan Sa: The unlawful and unauthorised staying in a home, building or residence without paying taxes for up to two years.

    • Maofan Nng: The unlawful and unauthorised staying in a home, building or residence without paying taxes for between two to eight years.

    • Maofan Jit: The unlawful and unauthorised staying in a home, building or residence without paying taxes for upwards of eight years.

    Arson - 

    • Maofan Nng: The accidental setting alight of any property private or public.

    • Maofan Jit: The intentional setting alight of any property private or public. 

    Larceny - 

    • Maofan Sa: The taking of property or mina with a value of up to 100 mina from a person or their home, without the consent of said person.

    • Maofan Nng: The taking of property or mina with a minimum value of 101 mina and up to 300 mina from a person or their home, without the consent of said person.

    • Maofan Jit: The taking of property or mina with a value of over 300 mina from a person or their home, without the consent of said person.

    Burglary - 

    • Maofan Nng: The entry into the residence of an individual with intention to commit a non-violent crime. 

    • Maofan Jit: The entry into the residence of an individual with intention to commit a violent crime. 

    Banditry - 

    • Maofan Sa: The taking of property equal to the value of up to 100 mina from an individual through violence or threats of violence. 

    • Maofan Nng: The taking of property equal to the value of above 100 mina and up to 300 mina from an individual through violence or threats of violence. 

    • Maofan Jit: The taking of property equal to the value of above 300 mina from an individual through violence or threats of violence. 

    Fraud -

    • Maofan Nng: The unintentional deception of an individual, through use of a written or verbal contract, or someone not fulfilling said contract.

    • Maofan Jit: The intentional deception of an individual, through use of a written or verbal contract, or someone not fulfilling said contract.

    • Extortion - 

    • Maofan Jit: The use of violence or the threat of violence to get an individual to perform acts they otherwise wouldn’t or to give over materials, goods, mina or information they otherwise wouldn’t.


     

    Misuse of The Arcane

     

    Practice of Forbidden Arts -

    • Maofan Jit: The practice of forbidden arts is the practicing of magics which causes corruption or rot of the soul; this does not include the voidal arts. 

    Harboring -

    • Maofan Jit: Hiding or caring for those practitioners of forbidden arts. Allowing them to reside, and perform acts of forbidden magic within your abode.

    Aiding and Abetting -

    • Maofan Jit: Helping or acting alongside/on behalf of practitioners of Forbidden Magics. Either through the act of luring, or participation in their rituals, or harming others in their defence, or for their desires. 

    Illicit use of Magic -

    • Maofan Sa: Use of voidal or deity based magic in an attempt to cause willful and conscious harm to another individual.

    • Maofan Nng: Use of voidal or deity based magic to cause willful and conscious harm or injury to another individual.

    • Maofan Jit: Use of voidal or deity based magic to cause willful and conscious permanent harm or injury to another individual.

    Magical Misconduct -

    • Maofan Nng: Causing injury or damage to other individuals through negligence or malpractice of magic.

    • Maofan Jit: Causing long term permanent injury or damage to other individuals through negligence or malpractice of magic.


     

    Crimes Against the State

     

    Tax Evasion - 

    • Maofan Nng: Unintentionally failing to pay taxes on a residence, storage, business or stall, before the allotted time of payment. 

    • Maofan Jit: Intentionally failing to pay taxes on a residence, storage, business or stall, before the allotted time of payment and repeatedly returning to attempt to keep said asset, without paying the taxes.

    Bribery -

    • Maofan Jit: Offering mina, items or other rewards to an individual in return for their silence, or dishonesty. 

    Obstruction -

    • Maofan Jit: The crime of preventing the Council, YPA or other authorities of the State from enacting justice, capturing criminals or state business. 

    Mendacity -

    • Maofan Nng: The willing and knowing hiding of information from the State, during an interrogation or otherwise. 

    • Maofan Jit: The willing and knowing hiding of information from the State, under oath or during a trial. 

    Insurrection - 

    • Maofan Jit: The act of inciting others to indulge or perform rebellion, or treason either outright or in secret through action, word of mouth, written word or any other method. 

    State Homicide - 

    • Maofan Jit: The murder or manslaughter of a member of the Council of the Jade State. 

    Treason -

    • Maofan Nng: Knowingly acting against the Jade State of Yong Ping through disobeying the State’s wishes, disloyalty or crimes which would otherwise harm the State as a whole. 

    • Maofan Jit: Knowingly engaging in espionage, armed conflicts or rebellions against the state.Or working for, and aiding those who are enemies of the Jade State. This would also include murdering, or attempting to murder member’s of the State Council in an attempt to coup, or cause a change in power for outside forces. 



     

    Tianrui Ryu, second Patriarch of Yong Ping, The Prosperous Zhu of the Jade State of Yong Ping, former Second Duhu of the Yong Ping People’s Army

    Chen Wenping, the Illustrious Chancellor of the Jade State of Yong Ping, former Honorable Minister of Justice of the Jade State of Yong Ping.

    陈  文平

    Atsuki Waythe, the Honorable Minister of Justice of the Jade State of Yong Ping, former Enigmatic Minister of Foreign Affairs of the Jade State of Yong Ping.



     

  15. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Chen Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             63

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Alchemy

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             TelvanniMagister

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Hirano Nanako

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is undergoing an activity trial and fails said trial, that you will lose the feat? And that if it is apart of the Lore Games, it might drastically change soon?:

             Yes

     

  16. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Wenping

     

    Character's Age:

             55

     

    Character's Race:

             Elf/Proto Elf

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Fire Evocation

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             Bethinwonderland

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Artemis

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, that you may no longer use it in character?

             Yes I am aware

  17. MC Name:

             BemoBlue

     

    Character's Name:

             Feliks

     

    Character's Age:

             67

     

    Character's Race:

             Dark Elf

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Housemagery

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             tadabug2000

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Ilkri

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, that you may no longer use it in character?

             Yes I am aware

  18. MC Name:

             Blue_Due

     

    Character's Name:

             Hazel

     

    Character's Age:

             7

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Musin

     

    Transformed form:

             Musin

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    The Musin are a small race of people that vaguely resemble, house or field mice. They stand at about 1'8" to 2'6" ft, having the same colour pallet range as ordinary mice, being black, tan, white, chocolate, fawn, with a range of patterning. Though most of their body is covered in fur with the exception of their hands feet and tail, which can be longer or shorter depending on the individual. The eyes of Musin tend to to be black, though on the rare occasion a Musin may have red eyes. Other parts of Musin biology includes a large pair of front teeth or incisors, again similar to that of a mouse. 

    The incisors can grow to be quite uncomfortable if you worn down consistently, this is often done through diet or chewing on wood. The diet of a Musin consists largely of nuts and berries, as they are lactose intolerant, and too small to hunt most bigger creatures. Though they do have a preference for sweeter foods. 

    The Musin are a fairly short lived as far as races go, with Musin physically maturing at 12 and being considered adults at 15, most only living as long as 70. Though the oldest Musin recorded lived until the age of 78. As a small race, they are one of the weaker races and can get injured from merely trying to hold weapons made for larger descendants. A Musin can have from between 2-3 pups in a litter, though these pups are born blind and hairless, over the next few months they quickly grow to being more akin to a descendant toddler.  Interesting abilities of the Musin are their incredible hearing, with their big ears. Being able to hear to higher pitched noises, as well as having good vision for in the dark. Though vision is good in the dark, Musin vision can be somewhat lacking in the day. 

     

    Musin due to their small size and lack of strength, are pacifists out of necessity. However what they lack in strength they make up for in terms of their intelligence. The Musin are naturally intelligent and curious people. This intelligence, combined with their culture, encourages the recycling of items to be broken down to be used for other items which are more necessary.  Another part of Musin mentality is their desire to steal, many of them turning to thievery. This isn't malicious, it is more their desire to continue to recycle and reuse, seeing some items as being of better use than just lying around. 

    Finally Musin are a very hygienic race, as they are short-lived and value making their life longer, they keep their hygiene in an attempt to avoid disease. 

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    Hazel is a black Musin with white fox patterning, and longish fur. His eyes are the average black of most Musin, the timid lad stands at about 1'5" and is still growing. He has large ears, and long whiskers, as well as a normal hairless tail. He wears a large sweater knitted from wool, which was taken from unraveling jumper and hats re-purposing the wool. His trousers, again recycled cloth made to fit him, and a large pair of glasses.  The boy often carries a small satchel around with him, with which he can carry items to sketch and document the world around him with. 

     

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    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             N/A

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

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