Hi, Mad (can I call you that?.. I dont wanna be rude)
I took your comments into consideration, and I changed the entire story and put in a few extra parts. Not to mention I also made Morfin older, and made him have kids later on in life. I also gave him a longer story and besides turning him into a widower for the rest of his life, I made him remarry.
I think these changes are for the greater good, and I had fun writing the story and coming up with new ideas.
Hephqestus
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Hi, Mad (can I call you that?.. I dont wanna be rude)
I took your comments into consideration, and I changed the entire story and put in a few extra parts. Not to mention I also made Morfin older, and made him have kids later on in life. I also gave him a longer story and besides turning him into a widower for the rest of his life, I made him remarry.
I think these changes are for the greater good, and I had fun writing the story and coming up with new ideas.
Sincerely, Hephqestus