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    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to requiring far too many changes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    • Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are not quite accurate, please refer to the following link for an example, though you are prohibited from copy and pasting https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    • Your Character Biography must have at least two lore references.Refer to our wiki (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page) to revise our lore. Useful pages to look at in our wiki, would be the Arcas page (The continent in which we currently reside): https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas, and the Orc/Uruk page, as it is noted they are your race of choice: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Uruks. A useful tip for when referencing lore, would be to make use of the following: cities, racial traits, events, etc.
    • In your Character Biography, you depict a city that does not exist within our lore (the city of Liath), you may ONLY use cannon settlements, which you may find examples of in our wiki: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    • The end of your Character Biography has a hint of powergaming; Though dwarves are quite short (5’0 or bellow), they are stocky and compact by default, and are often heavy as a result. For that reason, your character (despite being an orc), would not be able to punt a dwarf, much less as far as 38 feet. 
    • Though your skin seems to be fine, we require a better screenshot so that we may review it with ease. One way you could go about it, is to simply upload your skin file. 
    • Your Character Description is not quite there. In addition to orcs being muscular by default, here are a few tips on how you can improve the overall description; As opposed to saying your character is tall, or big, perhaps state their exact height (I.e “He stands at 7’0”). Additionally, you could describe how they stand, their usual expression, their outfit, etc. 
    • Your Character Traits need a bit of improvement. Gnomes are not a part of our lore. For that reason, you cannot use them as cannon creatures within our platform.
    • Your Character Name is not acceptable, it must include only your characters name. Half-Orc must be placed under your race, and you may not apply as a paladin, as they are a magic that you must acquire through roleplay once you are on the server.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario is not quite there for the following reasons: The action of your character contains some powergaming, a way you can fix this is by writing something along the lines of, “When the man jumps in my direction, I’d attempt to knock them upon the head with my axe, aiming at his chest” (do not copy and paste). Furthermore, you may not control the actions of npcs and/or other players, describe only the actions of your character.
    • Just as a note, keep in mind that once you get in-game, you cannot roleplay chasing down the conqueror, as this person does not exist in LotC but rather only in your backstory. You don't need to change this, though do keep it in mind.


    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Blue Budgie#9655, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: 

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