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  1. Changed Status to Under Review



     

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming.

    • Your backstory requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

    • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. You proved things that Fidelis likes instead of traits about his personality. Albeit, manipulative can count as one if you wish. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits.

    • I see that your skin is not up to par with the server, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use.

     

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  2.  

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    Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

    Here are the changes you had to make.

     

    • Your personality traits required at least one more to allow us to accept your application.

    You may reapply at any time.

  3.  

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    Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

    Here are the changes you had to make.

     

    • Your character name can not include “Frostbeard” due to it being an existing family name. 

    You may reapply at any time.

  4.  

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    Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

    Here are the changes you had to make.

     

    • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming were quite short. 
    • Your backstory required at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference.
    • Your roleplay response needed an action, not just dialogue.
    • You were lacking one more personality traits.

    You may reapply at any time.

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft! 

     

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483.

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    Ayo! I’ve taken over reviewing your application. Regardless, after reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • Your personality traits require at least one more to allow us to accept your application. Likes and dislikes do not count as a trait.

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  7.  

     

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft! 

     

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483.

  8.  


     

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • If you could before we accept your application, provide one more personality traits. Like and dislikes do not count as a personality trait.


    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  9.  



     

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • Your definition fo Powergaming is bit too short. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming if you need a reference. THe best way to lengthen a definition is to provide an example.

    • Your backstory requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a continent is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support if you wish.

    • I hate to be the one to say it, but the events in Atlas took place about 50 years ago from the servers current date. If you could, please fix this inconsistency.

     

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  10.  

    5IHMVDm1bFBbzfmgOMo_6ZiDyZ4rE3N3ggSTzW2i2-yP3gHBkXRqW2IZOEr-VWvftyal9FhEeIHRHBqTOn4XDemrJt4p2NUvrwX7NRodNHISS27I9iuw-4iu1BlCWwIV79ld6zUI

     

    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is quite short. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming for the correct definitions. The best way to lengthen your reply is to provide examples.

    • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

    • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. It is also incorrectly formatted. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.

    • You are lacking one more personality traits. Please provide at least three character traits for Elendir. What he likes and dislikes does not count as a personality trait.

     

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  11.  

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    Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

     

    Here are the changes you had to make.

     

    • Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming was quite short.
    • Your backstory mentions Renalia-Gladewynn, a recently created settlement here in Arcas; which subsequently, did not match up with yout characters age. 
    • Your physical description was also quite short.

    You may reapply at any time.

     

  12.  

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

    • Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming are quite short. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming for examples on how to lengthen your replies.

    • Your backstory mentions Renalia-Gladewynn, a recently created settlement here in Arcas. And you’ve also mentioned that your character grew up there, and now is of the age ~60. We can not accept your application until you can fix this inconsistancy. The name of a nation is also not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

    • Your physical description is also quite short. Please go more in-depth with your description of Azdrek.

       

      When you have made the changes, feel free to

       contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

      further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

      in our New Player Discord.

  13. Changed Status to Under Review

     

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    Your application has been denied because you already have an accepted application.

    You are free to make a new character anytime by use the /menu menu at any time in-game.

  14.  

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    Your application has been denied because you already have an application awaiting approval.

    Please contact your application handler if you have any questions or concerns.

  15.  

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    Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

    Here are the changes you had to make.

     

    • Your backstory required at least one direct lore reference.

    • Your definition for Metagaming was incorrect and quite short.

    You may reapply at any time.

  16.  

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft! 

     

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483.

  17.  

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response if you wish for so.

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  18.  

    5IHMVDm1bFBbzfmgOMo_6ZiDyZ4rE3N3ggSTzW2i2-yP3gHBkXRqW2IZOEr-VWvftyal9FhEeIHRHBqTOn4XDemrJt4p2NUvrwX7NRodNHISS27I9iuw-4iu1BlCWwIV79ld6zUI

     

    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

    • Your backstory requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support if uoi wish for so.

    • Though not an issue, you mention ‘infrastructure and factory development’ as a concept that your character has dabbled in; which albiet, can be interpreted in many ways. Our server here on LoTC is set in a tecklock resembling the technology back in 1200’s-1400’s. 

    • Your definition for Metagaming is incorrect and quite short. If you could, please change the definition to a correct one while also lengthening it. The best way to lengthen your definition is to provide examples! Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming if you need a reference; but be sure not to copy it word for word.

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

  19.  

    Y0NgcY6PeMoSOnX-ZBlzGZoh91CgZqGzG_a2ID8hQD14aT8TaK2X79zsYSgYM3iHeIuhxXmQXJ4WpfSQ4t8Y-QAc-_CQRV6xlNfrAXaDIJvqJu26QlZsDn549rY5AF-WfkFtoQLh

    Welcome to Lord of the Craft! 

     

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483.

     

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

    • I see that your skin is not up to par with the server, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use.

       

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

     

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft!  

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483. You may issue a /creq [message] 

    on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft!  

    I sincerely hope you enjoy your time here. After I set your

     application to accept, a bot should automatically whitelist you onto the server.

     If there is an issue with your white-enlistment please contact me on

     discord at @frog#0483.

     If you would like any guidance or help in-game, contact me or any Community Staff Member 

    and ask for a Wilven Monk for assistance with  LoTC with the following command.

     If you happen to need any assistance upon joining, run the command /creq followed

    with any questions or concerns you may have. 

    • We encourage new players to join our New Player Discord so that you can meet current players and ask our Community Team any questions you currently have.

    • It’s also very helpful to read the New Player Guide to help you on your travels. This guide contains prevalent and detailed information about roleplay and other mechanics of the game.

    • As an additional bonus, as per your character’s race, check out your race’s nations on  Nations and Major Charters, we also encourage you to check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

     Should you require any further assistance at any time in the future, 

    contact me on discord at @frog#0483. You may issue a /creq [message] 

    on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.

     


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    Your application has been denied due to copy and pasting a bit of our wiki into your application, constituting for plagiarism.

     

    You may reapply at any time.

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    Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

    I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

     

    You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

     

     

     

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

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