SpoonLordRed

okay, skin changed again

sorry you’ve had to review this 3 times over the skin

clearly my idea just didn’t really fit

okay, skin edits made, redid the design to be a dress with some plating incorporated

(still a bit flashy coloured to me but oh well, I can’t dull it much more)

Oh dear.

Some of the form has been cut off (at least from my mobile), probably because I made parts of it very long and full of fluffy and pointless language.

I'll say what they were supposed to say here, but I understand if I need to rewrite them to be more concise.

The line that abruptly ends 'let loose a ' should end with laugh.

The metagaming and powergaming defs got cut too. Metagaming should end 'because another player tells you it's being raided' and powergaming would have had an example. If this is because I'm reading on mobile I'm sorry.