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Etrius

By Etrius

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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Action that is based upon real-life knowledge, using informations outside of a characters life to use them as guideance
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Declaring a certain action successful without giving the other person freedom to act, In Roleplay it breaks of immersion and lost of fairness for others.
    Status: Accepted

Abandoned by his parents in a forest, He was taken and raise by Cave dwarves. Not knowing who and where he was from he was named Etrius. Noticing a mark behind his back as a child. the dwarves slowly realize the childs situation, still not knowing what it might do. They’ve became aware and careful around him. As time slowly passes by the Cave dwarves trained him in being a Blacksmith. Making weapons and armor and also tools are the things they taught him. He’s very kind and diligent, not very wise in the art of combat. Being able to use a sword and shield along with a bow. He never knew magic existed, since he only knows a few things in the current state of the world. He went to the surface saying farewell to those who kept him and raise him. Proceeding to his journey to a world of the unknown to him, Now currently looking at his map, he’d pick Agnarum to visit first.

Character Name: Etrius
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Black short-hair, Hetero-chromatic eyes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Both of your definitions are partially correct, but still not complete. I would like you to read the meaning of the terms here and here, and use this information to expand upon your current definitions.

 

Ø  Your biography does not contain any of our server’s lore. Please add atleast two references to the lore in your biography, which you can find here on the wiki. For The Human lore, please visit this page.

 

Ø  In addition to adding lore to your biography, be sure to also made it a bit longer. I wish for you to add a few more sentences.

 

Ø Your character not knowing magic is not really a trait unique to them, as it applies to all characters who are new to LOTC. I want you to replace this one with an interesting fact that is more specific to your character, and showcases their personality more. Be sure to also add atleast one weakness to the list of interesting facts!

 

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Zhikarta

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For the following reason(s):


 

Ø  The Kingdom of Santegia was on the previous map, Atlas. Your character can not be there now, but only in a location on our current map, Arcas. Please make sure you replace Santegia with another location.

 

Ø  You can not apply as a magical character, so please be sure to remove the curse part of your biography.

 

Ø  It is not possible to have your character get burnt as soon as they come in close contact to magic. When writing your biography, your character can not be magical in any way, so I suggest removing all references to magic.

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

 

You can join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

 

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! Should you have any further questions, feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), or by /msg (marb121) in-game.

 

You can find our New Player Guide right here. It contains all sorts of useful information, I highly recommend reading up on it as it will help you to get settled on the server much more easily!

 

Be sure to visit the wiki and forums for more information on the servers lore, roleplay situations and much more!  You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.


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