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    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is knowing something ooc that your character shouldnt know, that you then use ic as if you knew it there
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player is being unfair and over powered in roleplay, where they demand something to go a certain way. example: cutting off limbs automatically without consent
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Arya Underhill
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: A beautiful wood elf with black hair. She is short standing under 5feet and wears halfling clothes and glasses. She fears magic and fire.
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Your biography is missing lore. Please read our wiki for lore pertaining to your race, as well as the current and past cities .

Your biography is a little short. Please expand.

Your character description should describe your character. While “a beautiful wood elf” is technically a description, I would like to know more about her appearance

Your character is missing a fault in her description, this could be a fear, a physical issue, ect.

 

While it is not something that you have to fix, I would suggest giving some more depth to your character. A character who is just a seen as a beautiful tomboy wood elf is a little shallow. Perhaps explain why she is a tomboy, why was she raised in a halfling village and not with wood elves, and how did she learn how to use a bow.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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