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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is knowing something ooc that your character shouldnt know, that you then use ic as if you knew it there
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player is being unfair and over powered in roleplay, where they demand something to go a certain way. example: cutting off limbs automatically without consent
    Status: Accepted

She grew up in a halfling settlement called Willow Hollow . She didn't know her family but was happy nonetheless. The reason she grew up with halflings is due to her being found alone nearby. A happy old couple found her and raised her as their own. She spent her childhood learning to shoot a bow, Her adopted parents never liked her using weapons so she would sneak out and use a bow she had found washed up from a boat which had wrecked nearby. She never hanged around the girls of the village, instead she chose to hang around the boys. This caused her to act more boyish. One day she had been out far from home with the boys and they spotted a house, they went in curiously as it looked abandoned for years. They had accidently started a fire and a support beam snapped and hit Arya in the face. She was blinded for months before her eyes finally regained the ability to see. Her vision was horrible and blurred so they made her eyeglasses to see out of, she was traumatized by fire ever since. As she grew up she became more annoyed and less girlish. She became a swords girl and decided to travel the world, not having a home any longer. She arrived in Aegrothond and decided that her journey would start there.

Character Name: Arya Underhill
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: A beautiful wood elf with black hair. She is short standing under 5feet and wears halfling clothes and glasses. She fears magic and fire.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MamaBearJade

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Your biography is missing lore. Please read our wiki for lore pertaining to your race, as well as the current and past cities .

Your biography is a little short. Please expand.

Your character description should describe your character. While “a beautiful wood elf” is technically a description, I would like to know more about her appearance

Your character is missing a fault in her description, this could be a fear, a physical issue, ect.

 

While it is not something that you have to fix, I would suggest giving some more depth to your character. A character who is just a seen as a beautiful tomboy wood elf is a little shallow. Perhaps explain why she is a tomboy, why was she raised in a halfling village and not with wood elves, and how did she learn how to use a bow.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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