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Aphramora

By Aphramora

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is defined as using information your character hasnt learned in (roleplay) and using it for an advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is defind as giving your character absolute power of a situation with out giving any other characters a choice or say. Overpowering in a way you realistically unable to do.
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Aphramora
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 51
Physical Description: Dark red hair that almost sweeps the floor, Ears pointed high and eyes that reflect the sea. Skin that doesn't match one race but an inbetween of two.
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Lirinya

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Hey there. 

An overall good start to your app. There's only a few things I'd ask you fix up! 

 

  • You did include a couple of elven words in your back story, but as lore references I'd also like to see mention of places. At just over fifty, your character has seen two different lands! A simple choice of where they come from, and places they have seen would suffice. 
  • While I sort of see where you are going for your interesting facts, they need to be geared more towards traits. 

Curious is fine, as is proud, but there is no real defining positive, neutral and negative. 

 

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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