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Auctarion


Auctarion
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use of outside knowledge / informing others of game. events to help you ingame when they otherwise would not of known. In simple terms, it is the use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in-game decisions.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Giving your character unrealistic and immersion breaking abilities
    Status: Accepted

Auctarion was born into a proud family in Senntisten.  Both his parents had been the ranks of Seargent and Intitiate of the Order of Saint Lucien,  and had met each other after years of enacting the will the of the Church of True Faith. His father often told the boy stories upon his return home of the religious conquests they had made in Elven Kingdoms and how they had vanquished heretics and pagans and the like. With the orders disbandment after its various feuds with the Raevir Orthodoxy, his father turned to Blacksmithing and his mother a healer. They ensured their son was educated enough to read and write - through the aid of their religious contacts.  His mother taught him some basics of alchemy, and he often watched his father work the forge.

 

However, it was not until he grew older that he realised that there was something strange about his parents, and he grew suspicious of there whereabouts whenever he was sent to bed, as he often suffered from ritualistic nightmares. On occasion they would go down to a room within their house , below that of the kitchen - a cellar- which he was always told had a rat problem and not to go down there else risk catching a disease . Many a time he would hear strange sounds and feel vibration in the upstairs at night. When the boy was 11 his curiosity sparked courage- he waited till his parents had gone in, and try to follow them to see what they were doing. His small size at this age meant he did not make much sound - he was able to get past the door without alerting anyone - he found himself in a damp, dark passageway. He allowed his eyes to adjust to the dim light. Finding his way through a snake of low tunnels , he arrived in a central cistern. He could hear chanting, in the voice of his parents! He peered round the corner of an archway, what he saw shocked him; his parents were conjurers, practising dark arts for years under their house! He saw all kinds of alchemical ingredients on shelves- ground bones, various plants, sheaths of skin, skulls and coloured salts. He saw glowing tables with pentagon engraves and runes of all kinds. He turned to flee- but the chanting ceased and through a purple sphere stepped a demonic creature- with dark blue skin, horns and glowing red runes across its chest. It appeared to have hooves and fire simmered in its palms. His mother began to chant more - little did Auctarion know, she was trying to bind the creature to their will,  and his father began to chant too.  The creature let out a deafening combination of a growl and raw that sent objects flying in all directions, shattering cups and pots. His mother and father felt to the floor from the blast, whilst the creature raised an arm, revealing a flaming scythe as if summoned by its own magic. With a fell sweep, it cleaned in two his parents, and turned its large neck towards the boy, it grimaced and began to move towards the archway. He ran for his life through the tunnels, there was no way the creature could fit behind him.  He ran with unwavering fear out the secret door, up through his parent's house and to the outside street, never to return. 

 

When he had left his parents house he had no other family, he was an orphan, and none of the city guards had believed his story. For the rest of his childhood he lived with other urchins and orphans, doing thievery and pick pocketing for local gangsters. When he had acquired enough gold , he left the city, travelling around the rest of the Kingdom of Marna, finding work here and there whenever he could. He would use his relationship with the criminals he had known in his youth to perform more dangerous heists- robbing stores at night or jewellery out of the house of the rich. Ever since that night his parents were killed practising their own magic, he had a strange calling. He wanted to find out what they were doing and why, and he often fantasised about becoming a wizard itself. He started reading old books about stories of wizards hidden in the world. He would speak to travellers and hear their stories of fabled mages. 

 

Eventually he heard rumours of a guild in a far away city, overseen by elves, where all were welcome to learn magic from the simplest of spells to the powers of fire and lightening to undo the fabrics of the universe. He set out to discover this place and learn more......... 

 

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Character Name: Auctarion
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Currently a dashing rogue , Auctarion utilises his early education to discover knowledge where others cannot .
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application was really good, one of the better application I have ever seen while I've been a part of this staff team. You nailed nearly everything perfectly. The length of your biography truly warmed my heart upon reading it. But unfortunately...

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✦ Even though your application was one of the better one, your character cannot start with any magical abilities or already being taught by a teacher as teachers must be found in character. 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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I've made changes to the parts that I think you may have thought he already has magic or is being taught magic. Anywhere else says that he WANTS to learn magic - not that he is being taught or knows it already 

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Well done applicant! I've had an absolutely amazing time reading your application and only few application manage to catch my interest by so much. 

I can only hope that you're able to have an amazing time on LoTC, being able to fully develop your own character with other people as time goes on. 

The being said...

 

On the behalf of the Application team, I warmly welcome you to the Lord of The Craft community. I hope you the best of luck as you explore and roleplay on Atlas!

 

You’ll be whitelisted and implemented very shortly, you may also want to check out “ The New Player Discord ” for questions or dwell deeper into the wiki if times allow it.

While in game you can also use /atreq [message] for any assistance you might need from an Application Member or directly message me in game - /msg MadYeAd. Not to mention that /help is a very helpful command that should be utilized.

 

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