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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Talking about things your character wouldn't be able to know yet.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Already deciding what happens without giving the other person a chance to have a say.
    Status: Accepted

Moon Altois was born around Laureh'lin, her mother passed away soon after she was born from illness and her father is no where to be seen . She’s lived in the woods alone most of her life, surviving on stuff some Wood Elves passing by had given her. Due to living alone in woods for most of her years she is not informed of most history of her kind or of the world in a whole, just knowing what she’s overheard. From what’s shes heard when she was growing up when Garrond Frostbeard became/is new high king of Kaz’Ulrah. Her hair covers most of her ears so she’s sometimes confused for a human. She’s not good at fighting and prefers to avoid it at all costs but she’s pretty good when using an axe. She’s not social and she speaks in slang sometimes. She’s considered a young elf. Since she grew up in the woods she’s pretty connected to nature and surprisingly she likes art, that’s about the only things she has in common with Wood Elves. Her personality is quiet , awkward, weird, nice, gullible, and makes jokes to make things less awkward. Now she just wanders, though she would like to learn more about the world outside of her solitude.

I hope I did this right and that i’ll be accepted, i may be pretty dumb when it comes to learning stuff but i’d love to role play and learn on this server. 


Character Name: Moon Altois
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 56
Physical Description: She's 5'4, dark brown hair, dark brown eyes (One is covered by her hair), and she wears a white shirt with black shorts and knee high boots.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character.

 

Ø  Your character must fit into the server’s lore. On LotC, wood elves do not have horns. Please edit this.

 

Ø  Try and improve the grammar in your character’s interesting facts/traits. Also, having a lack of magic isn’t a character flaw, so it it would be best to remove this.

 

Ø  As far as I’m aware, the ruined castle called the Last Hope doesn’t exist in the server lore. If you think I’m mistaken, you can message me here on the forums. Otherwise, please remove this.

 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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Ø The event you’ve mentioned, the rebellion against the Holy Orenian empire, happened on a previous map before your character was born. Due to your characters age, it is not possible for them to have been born there. Please look for a city from our current map/continent, ‘Arcas’, or the map that was vacated an in-game year ago, ‘Atlas’. Alternatively, you could increase your character’s age so that they would have been born during it.

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting.

 

Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Communication Team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races!

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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