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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is against the rules, it is using outside knowledge that your character doesn't know or shouldn't know using in game stuff as well as outisde roleplay information. This is punishable by weeks and even permanent ban if continues
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Having your own character do something they could not. It creates an unfair advantage for characters and other players. Characters are neede to stay within there own realistic roles.
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Ziera
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 49
Physical Description: crystal white hair- braided- while hiding her ears underneath. Clouded Blue/ Gray eyes. Wears a white dress.
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Cornivore

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, you just need a little bit of help.

 

  1. The first thing I notice is, you say she is from this noble family pure bred, Im guessing. When you start on the server you cannot be noble until you are accepted and on the server, I request that you please change the wording for that since she cannot be noble.
  2. The second thing is the interesting facts I think you might be able to make them into sentences and they would be perfect.
  3. This is just a side note, but in elf lore the persona once above 50 they are considered adults, so I just wanted to make you aware because 19 is quite young and is considered a child.  

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)

If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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