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BreezeWolf
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowing information through 'Occ' Chat And using that Irp (Just using Occ Information Ig Like names, places ect.)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using Godly like power or such in roleplay doing godly like attacks ect.
    Status: Pending

She grew up in a cold land with her Parents, the land vast and open. The snow would fall the Ice wall would grow. She spent her days learning to hunt and to make clothing out of furs and silks, slowly she grew to love the cold that bit her cheeks when she stepped out the small home. She meet no friends, besides the small rabbit hares, and Arctic foxes. She was always lonely and was always talking to herself. When she turned 14 her parents left her alone is the land alone. She was forced to hunt and cook, that period was harsh for her but she passed it through. When her parents returned they brought nothing back, she hunted for 3 days straight and left her parents alone while she got them food. She always wondered why her parents wanted to live here in the burning cold, she would sometimes over hear her parents talking about escaping raids and dangerous races like Orc's and Ologs.. But She never took that as a valid reason. She never ended up understanding why her parents truly wanted to stay here, no matter how much she asked to go somewhere warmer.

 

She herself is very Calm and can't take anything serious. She is very slow in her normal state she thinks everything through since she had a lot of time to pass as a child. She Practices a Flute as Highlanders use mostly, stringed, flute, vocal and sometimes drums. She decided to use one of them and took the flute. She is very talented with years of  practice. She also makes scriptures, she can write but can't read. She simply moves her hand on the page while imagining letters, she can make out words but colliding letters to make short stories. She can only do this for a short amount of time before she can't write at all and her mind is filled with letters and jumbles.


Character Name: Ryia
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: A 5'2"ft Short slim woman, wearing a thick green robe lined in thick wool. Her hair was kindly placed in a long brown braid down her shoulders.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Pending.

 

- Please use more information from the server lore, your persona would also have been born in Axios judging by their age.

- The Ice Wall was something discovered only in Atlas, explain why your persona's parents wanted to move there?

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona and her parents live or lived out in cold/frozen regions.

- Explain why your persona decided to leave her parents.

- For interesting facts, add more personality traits and flaws, along with hobbies.

- Overall, more detail is always nice.

 

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions, feel free to send me a message.

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Fixed, tell me if I need more

 

(Corrections for the things that cut off)

 

'She is very caring over all and can't stand the fact of an animal dieing but she must suffer through it when she hunts'

 

'But it always get to her through the cracks in the wall the builds around herself (mentaly)'

I'm not sure how to use the lore in my writing beacuse I know Axios is the old land and I only know mostly about the Realm of Atlas, so sorry if I don't add enough information about lore

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No problem! Though I'll need you to make several more additions and such for your application.

 

- First, here is a link to the forums https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/

- I'd still like for you to make more references to the lore, specifically Human and Highlander lore if you can.

- Add more to interesting facts, specifically details about her personality, is she calm? Passionate about something? Just a few examples.

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That's fine, just a few more things.

 

- There really isn't the Artic in LoTC.

- I suggest replacing trolls with Ologs.

- Just add some more information and detail if you can.

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I mean I know there aren't any Arctic in Lotc, but there is a Ice wall and Fenn is located in snow so. And trolls I didn't mention trolls, and Honestly I can't add anymore detail I tried and I just wanna get online at this point. Sorry.

Okay I will fix that

 

Changed trolls to Ologs. That's all I can do now

 

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