BreezeWolf

Under review.

12 minutes ago, Riftblade said:

Under review.

Okay thanks*

Pending.

- Please use more information from the server lore, your persona would also have been born in Axios judging by their age.

- The Ice Wall was something discovered only in Atlas, explain why your persona's parents wanted to move there?

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona and her parents live or lived out in cold/frozen regions.

- Explain why your persona decided to leave her parents.

- For interesting facts, add more personality traits and flaws, along with hobbies.

- Overall, more detail is always nice.

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions, feel free to send me a message.

Fixed, tell me if I need more

(Corrections for the things that cut off)

'She is very caring over all and can't stand the fact of an animal dieing but she must suffer through it when she hunts'

'But it always get to her through the cracks in the wall the builds around herself (mentaly)'

I'm not sure how to use the lore in my writing beacuse I know Axios is the old land and I only know mostly about the Realm of Atlas, so sorry if I don't add enough information about lore

No problem! Though I'll need you to make several more additions and such for your application.

- First, here is a link to the forums https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/

- I'd still like for you to make more references to the lore, specifically Human and Highlander lore if you can.

- Add more to interesting facts, specifically details about her personality, is she calm? Passionate about something? Just a few examples.

Okay Done editing I added a tiny bit from their not lore but from their Arts if that counts hopefully that is enough. I read about Music and writing.

That's fine, just a few more things.

- There really isn't the Artic in LoTC.

- I suggest replacing trolls with Ologs.

- Just add some more information and detail if you can.

Wait Trolls where did I say trolls?

"dangerous races like Orc's and Trolls"

I mean I know there aren't any Arctic in Lotc, but there is a Ice wall and Fenn is located in snow so. And trolls I didn't mention trolls, and Honestly I can't add anymore detail I tried and I just wanna get online at this point. Sorry.

Okay I will fix that

Changed trolls to Ologs. That's all I can do now

Accepted.

You will be whitelisted shortly.

Thank you <3

User was already implemented!