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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Ur_friendly_fish#5082
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Power gaming can be avoided by always staying in character, showing that your character has their weakness and always respect the rules rules of the Game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: This can disturb the roleplay because it can give the other person information for a secret attack and get prepared therefore ruining the attackers roleplay and the rest of the people included
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 

"My name is John Finglebottom.

 I was born in a small town  named : Atheosis . I lived there with just me and my parents.

My mother worked at a tavern and my father was an amazing archer, you could even say that he was the best.

But we were very poor, and my childhood was…well…alright I guess.

I trained to become a great archer, and I also had no friends.

 But then one night our town got raided by a gang of orcs. They burned the entire village, burned it all down to a crisp, all of our money and possessions stolen, everything…gone.

 I managed to make it out alive but everyone else died, so now I'm on a quest for revenge and on a journey to become the best archer like my father before me.”



"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: John Finglebottom
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Blond-ish hair, Brown eyes, 5ft 7, 56.2kgs
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 

  • Please make sure to use quotations for your dialogue.

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Annabanana1014! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @annabanana1014

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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