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Ylyndar

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making use of information gained outside of roleplay like something told out of character. ((Using info from ooc into ic for example like Ylyndar using info from ooc into rp))
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing your actions on someone else without letting them respond, basically like forcing your emotes((A example would be that Ylyndar would cast an spell killing everything and everyone near him instantly without letting them respond, also forcing the ac
    Status: Accepted

Ylyndar comes from the Mixed Knolls where he lived far from other dark elves until he became an adult at 50. Ylyndar went to the desert because other dark elves found out he wanted to practice dark shamanism which is considered evil(i think!.) They chased him out from the Dominion so thats why he went to the Desert. Ylyndar did not care though because he wanted to learn and get power from Dark Shamanism, but Ylyndar unfortunately never found a teacher in Mixed Knolls and does not posses any kind of magic and feels bad about it

 

Although he's kinda humble with himself, Ylyndar wants to corrupt other dark elfs and get them to follow dark shamanism, Ylyndar's own pursit comes from the discrimination he faced from other races for being a dark elf like from the high elves, he believes that dark shamanism will give him the tools needed to overpower those that bully him, he now hopes to find a teacher to help corrupt himself and then hopes to corrupt the next generation of dark elfs. he is open to finding other ways to overpower his opposition though if new opportunities come by and seek approvel from the Dominion if they allow him to learn it in secret.

 

Ylyndar  does not have any magic but is highly ambitious to attempt to learn Dark Shamanism if he finds a teacher sometime during his life to feel content with himself and influence other Dark Elves and to defend himself.

 

Character Name: Ylyndar
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 64
Physical Description: Ylyndar is a young male Dark Elf with white hair and a shaven face with red eyes, and is rather tall. Ylyndar tends to keep his face hidden fromothers
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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`Hello there, your application is currently

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For the following reasons

~ your definition of metagaming needs a little work, please refer to https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming and also provide one example of metagaming.

 

~Your definition of powergaming needs a little work, please refer to https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting and provide one example of powergaming

 

~ You cannot start with any magics, these must be learnt in character once you have found a teacher. Also your backstory, is a little all over the place, you got to the desert but get kicked out of the dominion, which is a forest on the coast, no where near the deserts.Your backstory just needs a little work , with a little rewrite. I advise looking over the lore for dark elves and shamans, here are the links https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Shamanism. please review these. 

 

~your interesting facts must include one weakness and you cannot have any magical mention.

 

Your skin and character description must match, also your current skin it looks like your characters eyes are glowing, this doesnt fix with the no magic rule for new applications. 


 

If any of the reasons above involve the wiki here is the link wiki , this link will take you to the homepage.On here you will find all the server lore as well as the descriptions of powergaming and metagaming.

 

Your application being placed on pending means it was good, although there is still some issues, that need a little editing.From now you will have 24 hours to edit, once changes have been made please contact me either on the server via /msg Punisher8817 or on Discord Pun#6347. I will be happy to answer any questions you may have.

 

Also this is the link to our new player discord https://discord.gg/eySYjqw. Here you can ask questions, meet other players.

 

On the server you can also /atreq to place a ticket for assistance from either myself or a member of the application team.

 

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Hey there,

So far changes are looking good, just a few still to complete.

 

1. metagaming and powergaming, i need to see an example of each please.

 

2. Please edit your skin. The eyes cannot be glowly. 

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I edited them, it's kinda weird to explain but I know what they are

 

Metagaming : Using info from ooc into ic for example like Ylyndar using info from ooc into rp

 

Powergamign : A example would be that Ylyndar would cast an spell killing everything and everyone near him instantly without letting them respond, also forcing the action onto their characters

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Hello there , your application has been

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Welcome to our community and lotc, from all the server and the Application team.You will be whitelisted shorty, while you wait please look over our wiki page as linked here Wiki

 

Here is a link to our new player discord https://discord.gg/eySYjqw Feel free to join this to ask any questions you may have, also to meet other players of the server.

 

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, if you have any questions please feel free to /msg Punisher8817 in game or contact me on discord Pun#6347.You can also /atreq in game to contact any member of the application team for assistance.

 

Can't wait to meet you in roleplay!!

 

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