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William heartstone
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming is unfair and not fun by making you player do impossible or godly feats but to fix this i would say that the player needs to realize that they are not the only character in the story and that other people want to have a fun experience
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by taking outside knowledge that your character does not know and using it to your advantage making it not fun or fair
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: william heartstone
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: a 6,7 man clad in a red gilded suit with golden brown hair and black eyes weighing in at about 218 pounds
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


william stares at the woman curiously, then sits down on the seat where should i start william asked

 

anywhere you wish the old hag says

 

then ill start from the beginning...

 

it all started when i was ripped away from my original family 20 years ago its hard to remember but i can manage.

when i was taken from my family i was thrown in an "adoption center" made for the nobility to adopt children since child birth was to long of a wait.

they were nice to me but something just felt off but eventually i got to know them better we became an actual family. but then when i was 10 my adoptive mom died i fell into a deep depression. storming away in a fit of rage search the forest's for something to kill but found nothing eventually i came back to the city and found out from a messenger that my uncle died with her it felt like my whole life was falling apart in a matter of seconds. the most important part of the message was that he died from assassination from then on it was my quest to finds my fathers killer.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please review the term Powergaming and include your understanding of it. Your current answer is vague.

 

- Your roleplay response needs to be at least 6 sentences including character dialogues and actions in 3rd POV.

ex: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion, but he took a seat anyways. "Hello ma'am..."

 

- Lack of storytelling. Please include a snippet of your character's backstory like his family or how he grew up.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is 1.18.2 - 1.19.3

I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

Settlement Guides

Nations & Major Settlements

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [KaptainScarlet]. I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg KaptainScarlet to find me in game. If I’m not around You can always do /creq with your questions or you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord 

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like a run down on the server!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

New player hub

Another New Player Guide 

Have fun role playing! :D

 

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