DANIELAG3

✿You’re On the right track! Just a few things you need to change!

✿ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Your definition just needs a little tweak to allow them to be up to  LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. Be sure also to use correct grammar and spelling so I can easily read your definition.

✿Your Character Biography must be at least five sentences long. Make sure your spelling the words you use correctly.

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i changed my application accordingly

✿Your Character, Biography feels more like personality. A biography should explain how you got here and why you travelled to places like “ Haelunor him following a distinct path to get to the Kingdom of Curonian.” rather than just placing them to have a lore reference you should reference them to integrate with your story. Where your character has been, more about the house fire did he have a lot of families there? Did he live in Curon and that where the house fire occurred? Why did a human go to Haelun'or? Haellun'or is the high elf city, and they are incredibly biased towards other races. I would like you to flesh out your character biography a bit more.

i cnahnged my application accordingly

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