demonlordorcus

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  All lore used in game must be from the world that LotC is set in. You may not use lore from other books or films such as Lord of the Rings. LotC has its own unique setting, which you can find out more about using the LotC wiki.

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø Your character’s interesting facts & traits must be sentences of at least five words.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character. Please edit this.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

I have done the changes. If its not enough I'll add more 

Ø  Your character may not know any magic. Once you have been whitelisted, you can seek a magic teacher in roleplay.

Ø Your character cannot have been born in 1318. The current year on the server is 1710. Due to their age, your character cannot have been born in Reza, because it has only been established recently. Your character would have been born in the previous map, ‘Atlas’, which has now been vacated.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other of their notable features. Please edit this.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

I’ve changed it again and fixed my birthday and added attributed to description section 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

okay I’ve added a city to the biography 

I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting.

Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Communication Team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! You might also want to take a look at our new player guide for lots of helpful information while you’re starting out.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

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