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By Seraph_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using information gained outside of roleplay and applying it to your character for an advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using emotes that put your character at an unfair advantage over others
    Status: Accepted

Seraph was born in the city of Malinor in the year 1430. He was treated poorly by his parents and at a young age, he left the city. He did this to take care of himself and learn to be more self-reliant. He was never in one place for too long and he eventually taught himself how to live alone, he would also train with different people in the different cities he traveled to in order to get better with a blade. Sometime during his 70s, he was attacked by a dark sorcerer and barely escaped with his life. The injury he had sustained was minor, however over time he would come to find that the color of his eyes would slowly be fading away. Within the next 5 years after this incident, his once bright and beautiful eyes had all but faded to a blank, white color. Disturbed and self conscious of this deformity, he now wears a hood to shroud his face. Upon the arrival to Atlas in the year, he had no home and he now wanders the land in search of something that can make him feel useful, to get a feeling of satisfaction and be a part of something. To finally have a place to call home...

Character Name: Seraph
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 235
Physical Description: Tall 6'3 White eyes Longish grayish black hair a fighter has a cape
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ada

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Mentioning orcs, elves and humans doesn't count as a lore reference.

 

✦ It's not realistic for your character to be able to fend off a group of orcs by yourself as orcs are most of the time stronger and more numeric. They are well capable of working together in a group. Same could be said about killing a leader as the leader most of the time has to fight its way up becoming a leader.

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts to full sentences.

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Ada

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your age and the time you mentioned doesn't seem to match. The current age is 1669. 

 

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Well done applicant!

Hopefully, you'll be able to encounter a lot of things that will further your character development. Anyway...

On the behalf of the Application team, I warmly welcome you to the Lord of The Craft community. I hope you the best of luck as you explore and roleplay on Atlas!

 

You’ll be whitelisted and implemented very shortly, you may also want to check out “ The New Player Discord ” for questions or dwell deeper into the wiki if times allow it.

While in game you can also use /atreq [message] for any assistance you might need from an Application Member or directly message me in game - /msg MadYeAd. Not to mention that /help is a very helpful command that should be utilized.  

 

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