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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if there is something that my character would not have the strenth to do, instead of saying that this is something he did i would say that this is what my character attemted to do and see what outcome comes from that
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: because just like in dnd if your not suposed to kow something and you use that knowlage to break the game, would ruin it not just for you but for whoever is playing the game
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: adrik garvel
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'4 175lb black hair brown eyes, tanned skin, wearing stout adventurers clothes with hood
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—” Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

Adrik sits down on the cushion, wondering how to skim over the thieving parts of his adventure

 

 "Well, I'm... just wandering around trying to find a new life out of the hell that was my old life, and my father wanted me to become a knight, but there were too many rules and there was no adventure in that, so I went and started my own adventure, hoping to become some sort of hero maybe, although it is ending up harder than I thought, although I did not leave with a bad relationship if I go back to my father, there will not be much of an exciting life left in store for me other than becoming a knight.

 

[This next part is just for the extra backstory, I would not write this to anyone if I were saying stuff about myself]

 

Adrik starts thinking about the start of his journey...

 

 ...he liked the life of going out to see new things, one of his only regrets is that since he left his house he has not seen his mother.

things were going great until he started running low on cash, once that happened he had to make do with what he could, and with the help of one of his friends, he was able to learn a little about woodcraft and surviving in the woods. and soon was also a competent fighter. his friend also taught him the art of petty thievery and how to avoid the soldiers.

 

he thought about the relationships he had with his family when he left: his father mother and brother, even though his father was not pleased with his insistance that he not become a knight, there relationship was not bad.

with his mother he had a much better relationship, and with his brother there was not much relationship for they where in two different worlds, his being one of a more rougish nature.

 

he looks up hopefully at the old lady and asks a question

 

"would you happen to have some odd jobs I would be able to do which would get me a little coin?"

 

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions and ensure it is in the third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if you character doesn't speak on it

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- make sure all infomation given within the roleplay sample is properly presented and not as two separate items of text

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions and ensure it is in the third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please break up the text chunk at the end of your roleplay sample to be properly formatted with some more usage of actions so we can see you know what your doing.

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re 

doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is 1.20.6

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord smol_bean . I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg Smol_bean0  to find me in game. If I’m not around You can always do /creq with your questions or you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

New player hub

Have fun role playing! :D

 

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