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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Gaining knowledge that you find out about in activities outside the game and then using that knowledge in game where it is not appropriate for your character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Carrying out acts that are beyond what can be considered resonable and fair, and gives a player an advantage that is not earned or given to them in game, to make them more powerful than others
    Status: Accepted

Sudryal stops and calmly looks the man up and down, seemingly disinterested. After a pause, he responds bluntly “I see no reason how that would interest you, and furthermore, I see less of a reason to tell you. Now, if I may, I have things to do. Alone.” before he bluntly turns and strolls away.

Character Name: Sudryal Magnelis
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: 6'4, athletic 215lb, muscular
Fair skin
Ice white hair to shoulders, tied in a samurai knot
Sharp, piercing eyes, brilliant green colour
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Mm, your character’s name doesn’t seem particularly elven,, you may wish to change this! Here are some links you might find neat to use while brainstorming character names ?

 

https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/elf_names.php

- Your bio is rather short,, please extend this to at least 10 sentences long, still including at least 1 lore reference (which you’ve already done by including Haelun’or)! Also, here are just some links that I think you might find a fun read!! ❤️

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

- Your physical description and skin don’t quite seem to match >,<;; (the skin has grey eyes while the description reads green, etc.) Also might wish to note that the skin you’re using seems to be a tad misleading/feminine – this might be purposeful, but if not, just informing you that people may get a little confused! Be warned that your character may be referred to with she/her pronouns by those that are unaware;;,, (the eyelashed eyes and dress tend to give that impression, apologies if this is incorrect :,> ). Here is a link to the LotC Skin Archive where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character – just in case you’d wish to change this!

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Mm, I’m afraid your character couldn’t have been an important military strategist, and this phrase ‘This being said, he has become a young yet reliable military strategist for the High Elves, not hesitating to give his opinions on mistakes made by previous commanders in the Reimposition of Unity and the War of the Two Emperors. Such observations were not received well by others but were (most annoyingly), correct. ’ isn’t quiiite plausible I would think.. Of course, your character could’ve thought that some things may have been done better, but objectively saying that other people’s characters were incorrect and your character corrected their mistakes is rather a stretch, especially seeing as you haven’t done any of this through rp;; perhaps once you’ve joined the server, your character could begin doing this through rp and have their goal to become an important military strategist?

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!

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