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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when a player uses knowledge in roleplay that they have gained from out of character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player uses an action that is not fair for the player they are roleplaying with. An example of this is breaking immersion.
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Jamie
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Face: Blue eyes, medium length hair, small ears. Outfit: Green cloak, gold necklace with parents initials engraved
No major facial features.
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Lirinya

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A good, fairly solid start to an application. There are only a few minor pieces of feedback I’d like to give.

 

  • LOTCs main issue with powergaming is power-emoting, players not using the rolling system within things like combat RP and generally being unfair. As long as you are aware of this, then that is fine.
  • The only real reference to the lore you have made is the name of the map- Arcas. With a character being eighteen, he has no doubt lived in certain cities and nations, seen various races. The story itself is fine, even though being an “orphan” through being abandoned is a tad cliche. And so, I ask you add a few more pieces of lore into your story.
    • [Nations] is the page to begin on, if you are struggling to find information. This page is for Atlas, so will only help you for the time before we transitioned to Arcas.
    • [Nations] is the page to be on, for Arcas related nations.
  • Finally, please alter  your interesting facts. Keep in mind that these are supposed to be traits- things like physical injuries, mental impairments (being strong, being half blind, those sorts of things) and not likes or dislikes.
    • Your first one, his love for poetry, is more of a like.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Lirinya

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Thank you for your edits.

  • When we came to the new map, we didn’t land in Sutica- we all started in the same place, but as long as you are aware of that- I’m happy to let you in. You’ll no doubt pick up pieces of lore as you go, and further figure out the time line- I know it can be very difficult and even the oldest of us can sometimes struggle to keep up.
    • My suggestion is to just learn from playing. You can learn as you go, and you are welcome to the new player discord which I linked in my above post if you need any other help.

Remeber the rules, have fun, make friends, and we’ll see you soon.

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