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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i would simply not force any actions letting the "roll" deciding if it was successful or it wasn't
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because it can change the way you approach your gameplay. For example: you start "robbing" a player just because you know that he has a unique item on him from OOC (random example)
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Strunz Kazin'Kul
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: not so strong compared to other orcs. fairly muscolar and fast, he's around 7ft, bald and always wears worn armors, red eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

The orc looks at the old hag, he looks intimidated by her and began to tell his story.

 

"I'm Strunz, i come from far away. I'm from the Kazin'Kul Clan. I've been with them since the day i was born, they trained me and made me the orc i am today and i would give my life for my Clan, for all these years i fought with them in other lands and now, i'm here to fight with them again."

The old Hag looks at the orc and laughs at him. 

"Why are you laughing? what makes you laugh?!" Says the orc.

The hag responds "You don't look as strong as other orcs, you are not as big as them, i look at you and i see nothing, because nothing is what you are!"

The orc is furious and says "What makes you think that? I might no be the strongest of my clan but i can assure you that it doesn't mean that i won't give my life for it, you don't know who i am and what i have been through" 

"I've seen many like you. Most of them are failures even before they are born. I see nothing in you, you better go away now" says the witch in an angry tone

"You act like you are someone but look at you, you have tiny arms and legs, bones that can easily be broken, i could smash you right now if i only wanted to." says the orc laughing 

"It doesn't change the fact that you are still nothing, you can crush me, kill me and eat me but you would still not be better than me, get away now, you don't deserve any attentions from me as i am better than you, get away orc, it's your last warning" says the witch while staring at the orc with malicious intentions 

"You think that you can threaten me? Stupid hag" says the orc

The hag takes a dagger and says "I warned you."

 

the hag manages to hurt the orc to the point that the orc himself is screaming is screaming for help. 


The orc during a moment of confusion from the hag gets the possibility to hit her, the orc tries to attack the hag but nothing the hag blocked his attack with a magical spell.

 

The orc is on the ground, exhausted and defeated.

 

The hag is laughing at him and says “I will not end you as i want to make you live in shame.”

 

The hag is now leaving the orc but just right when she gives his back to the orc, she gets stabbed my him and the orc with brutal strength manages to kill his opponent by strangulation.


The orc will later eat the corpse of the hag (besides the head) and then run to his fellow companies.
 

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario &  Backstory has mentions of Powergaming! as you did not emote allowing the woman to fight back

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is 1.18.2 - 1.19.3

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord smol_bean . I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg Smol_bean0  to find me in game. If I’m not around You can always do /creq with your questions or you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

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Have fun role playing! :D

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