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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is referencing outside information through your character even though your character is not supposed to have knowledge of this.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is making a character perform an action that is not possible by normal standards or not giving them a chance to respond to your emote (example, Stabbing someone immediately without giving them a chance to counter roleplay
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Halfar Dashkov
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 83
Physical Description: my character has a smooth grey skin with red eyes and white hair like the clouds in the sky you see that he is quite strong from the way his body look
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4 minutes ago, jimsel said:

I bet this gets approved ? Intresting character (I’m not staff, just another one awaiting approval)

thanks ?

 

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  • Your powergaming description seems to have been cut off too early.
  • Your character story, while it does contain lore, only contains such right at the very end. I’d ask you try and incorporate a few more mentions of lore within the story.
  • Perhaps consider a second name. Characters with only first names are cliche, in a way.
  • Your character facts are overly positive. Remember that you need a positive, neutral and a negative.
    • Being afraid of spiders is borderline negative.
    • The first two are positives. You need to think a little more deeply on them.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Good changes. 

 

Remember that if you do wish for your character to enact revenge, then to keep an eye on the rules for power gaming and vilianous rp. 

 

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