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HenryEvery

By HenryEvery

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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The term "meta-gaming" in my opinion would be described as an out-of-game omniscence. It is taking information gained outside of the gaming world, and implementing it back into the gaming world. As a roleplayer on other servers, I found this quite annoyi
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-gaming in my own words would be easily compared to as if a new-born baby(character) suddenly learned how to talk(jump 100 feet into the air) even with no teeth(training). Now of course some characters can't actually jump 100 feet into the air, at le
    Status: Accepted

iAs I am approached by the man I am wearing a large black cloak that wraps around my entire body, and am carrying a black staff. After taking to the wilderness I decided to stick with using the staff as a weapon, and modified it with the little coin I made from a life of thievery. The world I see is red, but that doesn’t stop gold from shining. 

 

“What brings me here?” I repeat the question, almost as if I’m asking it to myself. I then remember what my father wanted, what he worked for, and what led to his death. I will finish what I started, and complete the task that I set out to accomplish before my brother and those wretched Goblins got in my way. I finally manage to work out an answer, “World Peace” I reply, and continue on my way. My father tried talking to people to get World Peace, but I realize there is only one way to unite all peoples; World Domination. I don’t care if it takes months or years to rise to the top of one measly city, but it will be a start.

Character Name: Aizen Rais
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Light brown hair, dark attire; to easily blend into the night, 5'9", 180lbs, and a nimble body.
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Biography includes a large bit about a large-scale event that isn’t in LotC lore. Please either make this large-scale event smaller as to not interfere with LotC existing lore too much or remove it. 
    • ”Even with the disbelievers, the fact that there would be no land quarrels, or pointless battles of race quickly spread to neighboring lands, and eventually guided the hand of all other races to the same conclusion...” to “...The goblets clattered to the floor as the representatives fell to the floor, the liquid spilling across the ground, and even more goblins coming out of the cupboards and other nooks and crannies which they fit in. Aizen stumbled up out of his chair, horrified by the sight. The Goblin’s representative slowly raised its wrinkly green finger up towards me, and all of their golden eyes of greed flicked over to me.”

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord as well.

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Character Biography includes a large bit about a large-scale event that isn’t in LotC lore. Please either make this large-scale event smaller as to not interfere with LotC existing lore too much or remove it. I recommend just removing this bit. 
    • ”Even with the disbelievers, the fact that there would be no more bar fights over race , or any more uprisings due to racial injustice quickly spread throughout the village, and eventually guided the hand of all other races to the same conclusion. That they must have a meeting. ...” to “... The meeting was called off recess, but Nullen remained out of the room.”
  • Your Character Biography includes a bit about going to Axios, though this is impossible. Our current map is Arcas, and as such, your character would be there. 
    • ”After hearing rumors of the agile and the strong race in Axios; Aizen began his journey. Upon finally reaching the outskirts of Axios; he collapsed of exhaustion.”
  • Your Character Biography includes Aizen having read about Strigae in a book, but this knowledge is very, very rare and shouldn’t be known. 
    • ”Aizen read about these types of happenings in the books that Corey gave him.”
  • Your Character Biography includes a lot about Strigae, which are very, very rare. Perhaps use an animal instead of something as rare as this. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord as well.

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord as well.

 

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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

 

Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg LotsOfMuffins, or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

 

After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
 

/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

 

When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

 

I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

 

In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race. 

 

If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

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