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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The game universe outside the game itself, e.g. if you are playing a ctf game, and somebody is infiltrating your base, calling your friend and telling him to log on and play to help would be metagaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: In the simplest form of word, doing something in roleplay you normally wouldnt be able to do in real life
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Morfin Movindawa'ar
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 63
Physical Description: Morfin weigh's 140 lbs, and is 4'7". He has hazel eyes and nut-brown hair. Morfin can be seen wearing a nut-brown cloak covered in mahogany twigs
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Mada

 

 

 

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera.

 

✦ It would be somewhat unrealistic that your character was able to work, have kids and then thrown into a marriage at such a young age for an Elf. As elf culturally
don't become adults before they're at least 50 years old. Having a child like that would be highly frowned upon in the elven culture.

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

 

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Hephaestus

Hi, Mad (can I call you that?.. I dont wanna be rude)

 

I took your comments into consideration, and I changed the entire story and put in a few extra parts. Not to mention I also made Morfin older, and made him have kids later on in life. I also gave him  a longer story and besides turning him into a widower for the rest of his life, I made him remarry.

 

I think these changes are for the greater good, and I had fun writing the story and coming up with new ideas.

 

Sincerely, Hephqestus

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Mada

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Well done applicant!

Hopefully, you'll be able to encounter a lot of things that will further your character development. Anyway...

On the behalf of the Application team, I warmly welcome you to the Lord of The Craft community. I hope you the best of luck as you explore and roleplay on Atlas!

 

You’ll be whitelisted and implemented very shortly, you may also want to check out “ The New Player Discord ” for questions or dwell deeper into the wiki if times allow it.

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