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Iwillinchiappetu
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: dirt0666
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: by simply only doing what you are character is capable of and without forcing any actions

    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: because it affects the way you approach people or events
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

"My name is Ledjion, i just got in here following my clan the Kazin'Kul clan,i dont know much about this land. During my lifetime i have been following my clan, they trained me and taught me everything i needed to know in order to survive."

 

'I have heard of you´ says the hag "Honestly you look like any other orc, i dont see anything special in you. You might be a good orc but on my end you just look like the rest of your race".

 

´Its clear that you dont know what you are talking about, i would do anything for my clan and im not just like everyone else, i have a morale´ says the orc proudly´i can spend hours talking about who i am and what i did in the past but one thing is sure i am not like any other orc even though i cant prove it to you right now."

 

´you talk like you never killed someone when in reality you probably did despicable things´says the hag while staring at the orc´

 

 

´how can you say that when you dont even know me"says the orc

 

´Its because you are just an orc and everyone knows what your race is capable of.´says the hag 

 

 

*the orc is clearly full of anger and he says " You better apologise now´

 

´or what?´says the hag while laughing 

 

*The orc tries to attack the hag with brutal strenght but at first he fails as the hag blocked his attack using magic.The orc tries to attack the hag multiple times but he fails every time due to the experience of the hag in combat, the orc also gets hurt fighting the hag he is forced to retreat.

 

*The orc full of shame and anger will comeback during the night and while the hag was sleeping he draws his primordial knife made of cut stone and tries to cut the hag's throat, the hag because of her enormous experience realizes it and manages to defend herself. The orc runs away annoyed and will never return.

 


Character Name: Ledjion Kazin'Kul
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 7ft tall,Very strong and super muscular, brown eyes, a chest armor very old and heavy, black hair, a pair of brown pants and a pair of black boots.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Your backstory includes mentions of powergaming. Please correct this.

→You must share a screenshot from the head of the Kazin'Kul clan that affirms your ability to play one of the members of their Clan.

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting them, please contact me!

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