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JockeyHD
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Something like 'Josh: Hi, Bob!' while they do not know each other.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Like 'Josh: Throws house in air, kills Bob with an punch.' Making yourself the strongest person in the RP.
    Status: Accepted

His Father and mother died at an early age. his Father died when he was eight, and his mother died when Aurimas was fourteen. He got adopted by an other family after his parents died. He is Highlandish. he is born in Markev. He is an good fighter with an Sword. He cannot fight good with an Bow. He got kidnapped by an murderer when he was sixteen. He killed the murderer, and ran in an other town.


Character Name: Aurimas Storm
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Brown Hair, Jacket, white Shirt, grey pants, brown shoes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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You have twenty four hours to make the required changes or your application will be denied.

 

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(Sorry for how long this application took to review, I became rather busy rather. My deepest apologizes) 

 

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The Character Biography is just not long enough. It needs to be longer. Like each sentence is too short and fragmented. Instead of "Father and Mother died." you could put "His father and mother both died at an early age, his father when he was eight, and his mother when he was fourteen." as shown you could make the sentences longer. You need at-least three sentences. This is the only thing keeping you from being accepted is the length of your sentences. 

 

If you need assistance or guidance, you can contact myself either

  • In Game: /msg Zombiefide
  • In Discord: Zombiefide#7551

You can also join the New Players Discord where we would be happy to help at any time: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

Your twenty four hours have been reset at the time of this post.

 

(Sorry once again! Busy week, I promise I will respond quicker next time!)

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Welcome to Lord of the Craft! I hope you enjoy your role playing experience.

 

If you have any questions or concerns you may contact myself: 

  • In Game: /msg Zombiefide
  • In Discord: Zombiefide#7551

As always we encourage you to join the New Player Discord, where we would be happy to help at any time: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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