Jstrick13

Hey there. A good start to your app, and there has been some effort in trying to find some relevent lore. However, let me help you there!

• While your powergaming definition is alright, it’s not what we’re looking for. In terms of a text based roleplay system there is also power emoting. I suggest you look into that, and reword your definition.
• Unfortunatly, Lin’evaral was destroyed such a long time ago. That is also when the Black Scourge was a thing. (You’ve gone as far back as Anthos! For context, Anthos ended in 1454, and we’re now in 1715!
  • With a character ages 40, he will have seen the maps Atlas (our previous one) and our current one, which is Arcas.
  • With that in mind, please rewrite the biography with more current lore. Remember, it needs to be around seven sentences long, so try and list where they came from, what they did, where their family when, and where they are now at the very least.
• Culturarly, fourty is still child-territory for elves. This is fine, as long as you are aware.
• Two out of three of your character facts are fine, but I can’t define the last one as a positive, negative or neutral.

Feel free to make the changes, and tag me in the discord when you have done!

You’re already in the new player discord, so feel free to ask any of us questions!

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