Matteiii

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

Ø  Your powergaming definition isn't quite there, please take another look over this. Refer to our lotc Powergaming wiki page

Ø  Your character's name is not appropriate, please change this. You also must provide me proof that you've been given permission to play a character of an established dwarven clan, you can dm me this or comment it below.

Ø  You must include at least one lore reference within your character biography. This could be a city name, world event, culture reference or similar from our LOTC lore.

Ø  Please re-word your character description, and try not to use references to things outside of lotc lore.

Ø  It's not really realistic to have a character be allergic to water, as such.

Ø  Be careful when phrasing 'power of manipulation', please word this to be less powergamey :)

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

i finished editing it

I'll ask you just to re-read over your biography and change all instances to referring as your character's pervious name :)

done sorry thank you

Your application has been:

On behalf of the server and AT members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar.

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Application team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us application team members.

Happy roleplaying!

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