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Matteiii

By Matteiii

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is accomplished when you use OOC information in RP for example, when someone tells you on OOC chat he will kill tyhe king, you cant use that information in RolePlay
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is made when you put your character to accomplish things that he cannot. For example "He chops off his enemy's head" This is powergaming because you demand his head to chop of, you live him no chance. correclty it would be "Tries to chop off
    Status: Accepted

Berdear Anvilaxe was a lost Anvilaxe. He, like some of his other brothers was lost as a child. One day when he was playing with the other dwarves outside of the mountain of Kal'Tarak, he fell into a hole. He slided deep down and reached a cave. He tried to shout for the others to come and rescue him, but nobody heard. After some time, he tried to explore the cave for another exit. Days passed, until he could find a little lake inside the cave. Berdear could see light into the water. He jumped in it and after few meters he swam into a waterfall. He could finnaly see the sun's light after a long time in the dark. He landed into the water unharmed and tried to go back to his parents and brothers, but he could not find them. He spent some of his life in other cities , away from the Anvilaxes until one day when the Anvilaxes visited the city where Berdear had a blacksmith, the city of Santegia. They wanted to buy weapons so they wanted to find a good blacksmith. While they were searching they so a well dressed man standing in front of his Blacksmith, inviting people to buy from his blacksmith because its the best in the city, Anvilaxes of course entered to see for themselves. They noticed that all work was made by someone else, a dwarf. The biggest Anvilaxe took a glance at him and shortly noticed that he was an Anvilaxe. He asked him about his familt name, and he was really one of theit brothers. Berdear explained them what happend all his life, why was he missing and then the Anvilaxes took him home. They were finnaly reunited.

Character Name: Berdear Anvilaxe
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 130
Physical Description: He has a strong beard with a wonderful mustache a nice haircut brown hair just like a very nice looking male dwarf well built and a smart one
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Your powergaming definition isn't quite there, please take another look over this. Refer to our lotc Powergaming wiki page

Ø  Your character's name is not appropriate, please change this. You also must provide me proof that you've been given permission to play a character of an established dwarven clan, you can dm me this or comment it below.

Ø  You must include at least one lore reference within your character biography. This could be a city name, world event, culture reference or similar from our LOTC lore.

Ø  Please re-word your character description, and try not to use references to things outside of lotc lore.

Ø  It's not really realistic to have a character be allergic to water, as such.

Ø  Be careful when phrasing 'power of manipulation', please word this to be less powergamey :)

 

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