Mr_Sprinklez

Hello, friend! Unfortunately, your application has been set to

I commend you on your outstanding detail in your backstory, it's something I don't see a lot. However, even though a lot of details were amazing in your application, there were a few things I noticed you'll need to change before you're implemented into our server. 

Here are the changes you should make:

~Please read over the Wiki for the definitions on Metagaming and Powergaming. You must add an example for Metagaming and a definition for

Powergaming.

~Please use starting locations or places written in our Lore for the place your character was born in, instead of making one up.

~Use our lore for your backstory too - Instead of the war you made up, use an event in our lore for your backstory!

~Unfortunately, your character cannot start out with any knowledge of magic, and he cannot have practiced magic. Your character must learn about magic in our RP after you're accepted.

~Please adjust your character description! While it is a good start, you shouldn't say he has magic swirling around him, as no magic is allowed to your character when you first start. Also - Add more details to make a playable character. Start with what he looks like, how tall he is -- What does someone notice when they first look at him? 

~Please include a weakness to your character in the section "Interesting Facts."

You can make these changes by editting this topic - Do not create a new one. When you are finished, contact one of the Application Team members - Or even better, me on discord! (sadboy #9413)

Good luck, and if you need any help - You can contact me. I am here to help, and more than happy to help! Do not be afraid. 

Also, the New Player Discord is available for you to use, it contains several people and several posts strictly to help you, and you only! Use this resource to your benefit, as assistance from other players is heavily beneficial.

 

Hello! I have fixed all the things you said! However, I grabbed that war from the wood elf lore. If you would like me to change it, that’s 100% fine but just wanted to let you know I didn’t make it up. I also added that he wasn’t very good at average combat. If you would also like me to change this, I would be happy to.

While your changes were great - There were two points that made me maintain your application as

~The war you mentioned is ancient history - And your character is not old enough to have been alive during that war. 

~Please include a proper weakness. While what you set is a slight downside, I do not consider it a weakness. An entire point in the 3 points must be dedicated to your character's weakness.

Got it! Fixed those things! 

Unfortunately, you still have two points to adjust:

~ Please add more descriptive details on your character's appearance. I suggest eye color, hair color, skin appearance, and unique details about his appearance. Is he fat? Skinny? 

~Your weakness is not lore-appropriate. Daggers to not bond to people - Please fix this. 
 

Sorry about that. I changed it again

Congratulations, your application has been

I am happy to say your changes were outstanding and you have earned acceptance into the server!

You will soon be implemented into our server, be ready!

If you need any help at all, please send me a message! I am here to help you with roleplay or how the server works.

Good luck, and welcome!

User was successfully implemented!