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Mr_Sprinklez

By Mr_Sprinklez

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is using knowledge your character would not have. For example, you are in a skype call with someone and they are giving you info about where they are even though your characters are far away from eachother
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is forcing an action on someone. for example “John pushes Jimmy to the ground.” A better way to put this that isn’t power gaming would be “John attempts to push Jimmy to the ground.”
    Status: Accepted

Adair was born in a thriving kingdom in the Medanesian Islands. His parents moved to this human-filled kingdom after their old village was demolished by a tsunami. He was mocked by the other human children because he was a wood-elf. The humans went so far as to frame his parents for a crime they didn’t commit, and they were executed by the king’s guard. After that, Adair promised himself he would get revenge. Adair was picked up off the street by a thief. When Adair was old enough, he started training to be exactly that, a silent thief-assassin. He used his skills to steal from the entire kingdom and became very rich. After a few years of doing this, he was caught and sentenced to death. At the gallows, he was just about to be executed when his mentor ran out and started slaughtering the surrounding people. In the chaos, Adair was able to escape by boat before he was executed. Unfortunately, he had no experience with sailing and crashed into the beach of Atlas, magicless, broke, and homeless. With nothing but a cloak and a dagger, he will have to regain his fortune in Atlas. 

Character Name: Adair
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 93
Physical Description: A Wood Elf with a dagger on his belt .He is wearing a cloak and leather armor. He is smaller than average.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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LaffenOutLoud

Hello, friend! Unfortunately, your application has been set to
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I commend you on your outstanding detail in your backstory, it's something I don't see a lot. However, even though a lot of details were amazing in your application, there were a few things I noticed you'll need to change before you're implemented into our server. 

Here are the changes you should make:

 

 

~Please read over the Wiki for the definitions on Metagaming and Powergaming. You must add an example for Metagaming and a definition for

Powergaming.

 

~Please use starting locations or places written in our Lore for the place your character was born in, instead of making one up.

 

~Use our lore for your backstory too - Instead of the war you made up, use an event in our lore for your backstory!

 

~Unfortunately, your character cannot start out with any knowledge of magic, and he cannot have practiced magic. Your character must learn about magic in our RP after you're accepted.

 

~Please adjust your character description! While it is a good start, you shouldn't say he has magic swirling around him, as no magic is allowed to your character when you first start. Also - Add more details to make a playable character. Start with what he looks like, how tall he is -- What does someone notice when they first look at him? 

 

~Please include a weakness to your character in the section "Interesting Facts."

 

 

You can make these changes by editting this topic - Do not create a new one. When you are finished, contact one of the Application Team members - Or even better, me on discord! (sadboy #9413)

Good luck, and if you need any help - You can contact me. I am here to help, and more than happy to help! Do not be afraid. 

Also, the New Player Discord is available for you to use, it contains several people and several posts strictly to help you, and you only! Use this resource to your benefit, as assistance from other players is heavily beneficial.

 

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Mr_Sprinklez

Hello! I have fixed all the things you said! However, I grabbed that war from the wood elf lore. If you would like me to change it, that’s 100% fine but just wanted to let you know I didn’t make it up. I also added that he wasn’t very good at average combat. If you would also like me to change this, I would be happy to.

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LaffenOutLoud

While your changes were great - There were two points that made me maintain your application as
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~The war you mentioned is ancient history - And your character is not old enough to have been alive during that war. 

 

~Please include a proper weakness. While what you set is a slight downside, I do not consider it a weakness. An entire point in the 3 points must be dedicated to your character's weakness.

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LaffenOutLoud

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Unfortunately, you still have two points to adjust:

~ Please add more descriptive details on your character's appearance. I suggest eye color, hair color, skin appearance, and unique details about his appearance. Is he fat? Skinny? 

~Your weakness is not lore-appropriate. Daggers to not bond to people - Please fix this. 
 

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LaffenOutLoud

Congratulations, your application has been

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I am happy to say your changes were outstanding and you have earned acceptance into the server!

You will soon be implemented into our server, be ready!

 

If you need any help at all, please send me a message! I am here to help you with roleplay or how the server works.

 

Good luck, and welcome!

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