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Noirde

By Noirde

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using outside knowledge as guidance. For example "Hey bro, <player user> is raiding me, get online soon"
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is doing something unrealistic in roleplay. For example, *I spawn a black hole that sucks you in and you die forever*
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Noir Voidheart
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: short white hair(goes to mid neck) , Normal eye color glossy white/silver. 5'7, Perm blood stains on body/clothes. Pale
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MamaBearJade

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Your Metagaming definition and Powergaming definition are not quite correct. Please see our Metagaming WIki and Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

While you have lore in your biography, it is severely incorrect.

  – Ker wolves are given out through events, so you must receive one from one of the accepted Breeders

  – To use magic, it takes quite a bit. You cannot force someone to kill themselves with mental magic

  – Mental magic cannot be used in combat

  – Iblees will not just randomly make a child his pawn and give him magic

  – Magic cannot be obtained by anyone under the age of 16

  – Elves would not leave an infant to die

  – It makes no sense why they did not kill the wolf

You have quite a bit of powergaming within your biography

  – Mental Magic is powergamed :: Used in combat, used to make a character kill themselves

  – Cannot communicate with animals without druidism

  – Iblees

  – Eyes changing color, hair dripping with black and blood

  – Being able to go against Iblees

  – Dark Magic? Not sure what it is

  – Knowing Alteration without an ingame teacher

Your character cannot change their appearance as described

Your interesting facts hold errors

  – Cannot know magic prior to joining the server, nor without an in game teacher and an accepted magic application

  – Cannot create something from nothing

  – Cannot be telepathic

Your interesting facts are missing a fault

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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MamaBearJade

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While we will allow you to be raised by wolves, you should look up the reprocussions of being raised by wild animals.
Again, elves of any kind would not leave an infant to die. Leaving them food and clothes is just like leaving them to die.

Your interesting facts are missing a fault

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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Lukariatias

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  • Your Backstory contains a number of issues, they are as follows:
    • Fire Evocation cannot “temporarily” blind and deafen people.
    • It is extremely rare for Humans to be Druids, and one would not live with the Humans, they would live with the other Druids.
    • Druids do not send birds off to find animals to care for Elven children. They would care for the child themselves.
    • It is very unlikely for anyone to be realistically raised by animals in the wild. A child would be extremely likely die.
    • Wolves cannot be ‘Amber’ colored. I am assuming this is what you intend when you say “Amber Wolf.”
    • Raw meat is poisonous.
  • Your Interesting Facts contains two power-gaming points. It is also missing a unique negative characteristic.
    • First: Saying you can “befriend animals” is very general, and suggestive. Please be more specific, and elaborate.
    • Second: Understanding the body-language of all animals is a nigh-impossible feat. Please change this.

 

Your application was generally satisfactory, however there are some issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me on the forums once the requested changes have been made.

 

The server wiki page has a great deal of important lore information, as well as the meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Community Staff, and meet other server players.

 

For future assistance and/or questions, feel free to contact me through discord at Lukariatias#7126, or by issuing /msg Lukariatias in-game. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket.

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Lukariatias

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Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on the forums through PMs. You are encouraged to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Staff any questions you might have. Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on the forums or on discord at Lukariatias#7126. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket.

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