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ObsidianCW
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Obsidian#4429
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Is the usage of any form of information that is not valid for the knowing of your Charecter. ie Knowing the answer to a dungeon without even looking at it
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when someone does an action that generally is unrealistic or impossible to have been done. IE *Snaps fingers and whole island blows up*
    Status: Accepted

Fynn Reimund is a Highlander Human who is a Hanseti. He was born in  Haense , born in the year 1733. His parents were both native from Atlas in the City of Haense. after they left Atlas for Arcas, they rebuilt their lifes by becoming tanners, Fynn never took from his parents about tanning however, he enjoyed  education and politics. Fynn was more introverted at a younger age siding with books over playing with sticks, but when he did he would play with his school mates, he would constantly play as a soldier hoping to bring order . As a teen he read a book that mention the Teutonic Order that he found in his Local Library in his School. he asked his parents on the Teutonic Order, his parents had known what they were as their parents and their ancestors had told tales of their Former Glory, but the in-stability of its latter years was not something to gloat about. Fynn would read deeper into the Tales of the Teutonic Order. events like How they Defeated the Flays and Blood Mages and how they were able to liberate so many innocent people with ease and how they were a key part of the Holy Oren Empire . Fynn felt that The Teutonic Stood up for Justice and Equality, but also Righteousness. When he was 16, his mother became terribly ill and Fynn sat next to her mom for days praying that she becomes healthier the next day, Unfortunately  she would pass away after 10 days of first contracting the symptoms. Filled with Grief and Self Blame, he ran away constantly blaming himself. He ran and ran until he had nothing left to lose. His Father assumed the 2 worst options that he was kidnapped or that he died running away, The Father would die knowing he had nothing else to live for. Years would pass and Fynn comes back to the lands of Arcas with his new founded Determination to make a world of justice and righteousness and honor the sacrifices people have made. Fynn with nothing to lose, sets off to his new life.  


Character Name: Fynn Reimund
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: His hair has a tone of Dark Umber is short. He has a Umber Goatee. his skin has a tone of rosy-pale. he is 5'7 and weighs 62KG. his eyes are Cyan.
Roleplay Scenario:

He Would Stop Walking and glance to the Gentleman and then to the Gentleman Clothes. he’d inspect the mans clothes and his stature and raise his left eyebrow  . Fynn would say “Good Day to you sir. May God be with you. What brings me here? Well i was about to go buy some Supplies like Bread and  some Leather, maybe some pints.” he would  walk past him somewhat ignoring him at that point, he then would turn back with his hand on his chin in a confused trance . He would  then exclaim saying “Actually do you know the directions to a Place that sells Supplies? Wouldn't hurt if you tagged along. get you something for your Generosity along with it. “ 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

 

  • Your backstory contains multiple grammatical errors, please fix these.

  • Your roleplay scenario shows multiple moments when your character thinks aloud, aka, their emotes tell what they’re thinking. This is considered bad roleplay, so instead of saying “he infers that the clothes could mean nobility or very wealthy” instead put “he’d scan the mans clothing from head to toe, his brow slightly raising as he does so.” as well as your final sentence needing closing quotation marks.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Ttsim! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Please can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

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Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Tsim#1832]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Ttsim to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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