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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: If someone is attacking you or raiding your stuff. You can find metagming on Discord
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A character doing something that in reality and can't do. Also when your character does something to overpower another character with no resistance, when there should some even if not a lot.
    Status: Accepted

Kratos was born high up in the mountains by his fathers forge. His father was an average dwarf Motsognir, Kratos till this day does not know his mother. Kratos was only 2 years old at this point, it was any other normal day for him and his family. Out of nowhere his home was attacked by dark elves. There was secret railway that Motsognir built before Kratos was born. The railway leads to no place at all, it's a last hope effort that a kind hearted person would find Kratos if something ever bad happened to him and raise him. He put Kratos in a mine cart and sent him on his away. Motsognir and Kratos's mother grab their weopons and tried fighting the dark elves, but it was no use. Kratos was alone for days until a warrior named Armod found him, and took him in. From the day Kratos could pick up a sword Armod trained to be a strong warrior until Kratos now 19, had to take care of Armod who has fallen very sick and eventually died. Before Armod died he told Kratos to fight for him and pride, but don't lose control it will be the death of you. Kratos was a very angered child for some reason it was just his nature. When he would train with Armod he would lose his composure and try to kill Armod, but every time Armod overpowered him. Once he gathered his stuff he went to look for a place to learn and study the religion of The BrathMordakin

Character Name: Kratos
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Muscular, white, with red tattoos all across his body
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ivoreyy

Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect- please revise these. The best place to go for information is out LOTC wiki pages- Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages (Just remember not to plagiarise)

Ø  Your character biography is too short, and lacks the one required lore reference from our server history and lore. Please add more detail about your character, and the required lore reference. (This could be a city name, world event, culture reference or similar)

Ø  Be careful when referring to your character as 'The strongest of their race', as this is generally very OP. 

Ø  You must include at least one weakness within your three interesting facts

Ø  Your skin does not fit your chosen race's lore- please change or edit this. A good place to go is our LOTC Skin Archive -Where there's loads of free-to-use and lore approved skins that you can use.

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!


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Ivoreyy

I see you've made some edits- great! There's just a couple more things

Ø  Your powergaming definition is still a little off- add some more detail please

Ø  Your character cannot be a descendent of any form of royalty

Ø  Please add the one required lore reference into your biography :)

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Ivoreyy

Accepted! 

 

On behalf of the server and AT members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me make an /atreq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar. 

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Application team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticked if you require assistance from any of us application team members.

Happy roleplaying!

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