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pandarua
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use information that characters don't know in role-playing to perform role-playing, but users may know information other than roles.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The role of using unfair and unrealistic advantages or abilities to other characters. For example, avoid multiple attacks and kill everyone around you without injury or even fatigue.
    Status: Accepted

After Pandarua was born, his parents abandoned him and left him to the northeast of the Kaz'Ulrah kingdom. Master picked him up from the dangerous forest to avoid being eaten by wolves. So he lived with Master from an early age. Teachers taught him how to survive and fight, so that he thrived. He has great talent in hunting and tracking.They live on mountains far from towns. But one day in 1691, a group of robbers broke into the mountain. They are hungry and fierce. The robbers killed Pandarua's master and set fire to their home. The Master sacrificed himself and saved Pandarua's life. However, Pandarua's chest was pierced by robbers and fainted in the forest. When he woke up, the fire and the impact made him lose his memory. So, with the remnants of memory and hatred, he began his road of revenge. He no longer trusted any stranger. After healing his wounds, he came to Republic of Vrakai alone, where he lived as a bounty hunter.


Character Name: pandarua
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: His hair was messy, but hid a pair of sharp eyes. He was poorly dressed but neat, and his arms were strong and powerful.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your Metagaming definition and Powergaming definition are not quite correct. Please see our Metagaming WIki and Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

You have no lore in your biography, please include at least two pieces of lore.

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Your Metagaming definition and Powergaming definition are still not quite correct. Please see our Metagaming WIki and Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples as well.

You have no lore in your biography, please include at least two pieces of lore. The time you placed is too far back for your character’s age. Current year is 1696. Please include places or people as your lore.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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On 12/31/2018 at 1:56 AM, MamaBearJade said:

Changed Status to Pending

Please review it again.English is not my mother tongue. Thank you very much for your valuable time.

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