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randomgamer5000
  • Rules: Yes
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: if I am not sure if it is ok to do things that makes myself too powerful i ask friends and other players what I will do and I hope they well give me good advise.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: if you know everything of the characters before you even start you already know what to do and it is not fair to new players who don’t know how to get better stuff because everyone has to find its own way to play.
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I sat down, thinking about how to start and started with my story. 'I once was just like the other elves, living a normal live as long as possible. boring but still a life. one day I decided to go on adventure and started traveling around the lands, helping people where I can fighting bandits and stuff, just like the normal adventure until I met a group of orges, when they saw me they surrounded me and started atacking. I couldn't do much and someone behind me captured me with a net. they tortured me every day after that. until a week ago. they let me alone for a minute and they left accidentaly a sword in my reach. I cut the chain and ran away. that moment I promised to take revenge on the ogres and ended up here searching for help. not knowing what to do. that is my life until now. if you know anything that could help me defeat the orges, please tell me all about that.' the old hag said: 'I see you are desperate to take revenge on the orges and I don't like them too, but know not every orge is a monster that kills innocent people. but if you want to take revenge you first have to train more and learn you true abilities.' after she said that the tent disappeared in thin air and I was alone again. with questions going trough my head I saw she left something. I picked up a package and opened it. in the package were 2 weapons a bow with razor sharp arrows and a sword with a metal that I coudn't recognize. and a letter from the old hag. in the letter was one centence. 'if you want to take revenge, then you need better weapons.' then I started my new adventure with my new weapons, searching for someone who could train me.   
 


Character Name: Faelyn Kriszumin
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I am a elf so I have like pointed ears and stuff I am 1.80 meters tall I don’t look that strong, white skin with green eyes blond hair and am 63kg.
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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please try to avoid cliché tropes such as this group killed my friends/family in your backstory.

 

If you need help making the changes, here are some sources:

 

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out!

The Main LOTC Discord:

https://discord.gg/lotc

Settlement Guide:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

A list of Nations and Major Charters:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

The New Player Hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

Lastly, Have fun role playing!

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