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Raven Drakenhof

By Raven Drakenhof

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you know something that your character doesnt know to that point or call help from a player even when she/he isnt there
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you force a rp in the way you want it to go, for example: Dodges attack and stabs you to death
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Iculro Drinriesh
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 56
Physical Description: He is wearing brown pants , leather boots , a black jupon , a red gugel with hood and a wooden mask.
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Dromui

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Thanks for applying to Lord of the Craft! After careful review of your application, there are a few things I've come across that need to be fixed in order to accept you. Do not fear, you aren't being denied, you just need to make the changes and you are good to go. Below, you will find the necessary edits that must be made:

  • Your powergaming definition is a little lackluster. If you can expand on it a bit for me I'd greatly appreciate it.
  • Your character description isn't how people would react to him, but rather it should be about what they would see when looking upon him. For examples, descriptions of clothing, how his body appears physically, that sort of thing.
  • The name isn't a bad one, but it's not the most culturally fitting for elves. You don't have to change it, but it'll make you feel a little out of place, I believe. If you want any suggestions, lemme know. 
  • Your interesting facts section requires one fault in it. None of those really can be considered a fault. Add one fault for the character.

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes to the application before it will be denied. If you require any help during this time, please feel free to message myself or another member of the Application Team. Below, you will find some links that will help you in fixing up the application a bit.

 

Dark Elf Wiki Page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Dromui

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Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

 

After reviewing the edits you made to your application, you have been accepted! During your stay with us on LotC, please feel free to reach out to myself at any point if you require assistance, or any other member of the Application Team. On top of that, the Game Moderation Team are an excellent source of assistance while you remain with us. It has been a pleasure reviewing your application, friend. Don't be afraid to use those sources I linked above at anytime while on LotC, as our wiki and various Discords go a long way at helping create lasting friendships and immersion on the server. You will be whitelisted and able to play shortly, have fun!

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