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Gorlun Arakhili

By Gorlun Arakhili

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: joms#8278
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is a type of roleplay that is used among a veriaty of different games
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its a way of interacting wit a game
    Status: Accepted

At birth, Gorlun's mother abandoned him with his dad and brother. they hiked long journeys and camped far from home. Across their journey, they found a poor, injured rhosgobel rabbit, and they took it under their wing. They started to grow suspicions on how fast the rabbit was, until one day it fled, never to be seen again. 

 

60 years later, Gorlun's and his family were living a happy life in the mountains when highlanders theived and destroyed his home, killing both his brother and father in the process. He was left saddened by the tragedy, until one day he came across a lone dark elf who was in dire need of help. 

Character Name: Gorlun Arakhili
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 74
Physical Description: Has long ginger hair and dark brown eyes. he is 4'2 and 254lbs.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

He stumbled into the bazaar of a cheap boat, the sun was hot and the air was thick. He looked around studying the people around him, and noticed a rich looking man approach him. He was of elf decent and spoke slow and calm. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?” he asked. I responded cautiously, asking ''I am here seeking a party, a group to venture with on my travels. I need them to help me reclaim my fortune. Is there anyone here that can help me with my enquiry?'' 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards (The shading is too noisy). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

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Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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Melpomenne

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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

 

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

 

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If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

 

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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