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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Particle101#8696
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when a person uses the internet (out of character) to find information on a subject or person. This is not allowed for it ruins part of the roleplay idea, which is to expand your knowledge as you go along on your journeys.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is unrealistic or "unfair" emote or response language that will show superiority over another player, and would ruin many good roleplay scenarios.
    Status: Accepted

Aaron turns to the man, and addresses him “kind sir, I thank you for your hospitality, but I am afraid I have no time to spare. I am headed for the market to prepare for a long and dangerous journey, so good day, and do not delay me.”  

The man looks saddened by the abrupt end to the conversation but understands. This Aaron fellow looks like somebody not to be messed with.

“fare thee well then, and tarry not.” the man said, and walked away.

Aaron mumbles under his breath “waste of my time i do say...”

Character Name: Aaron Brookswood
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: height around 6' 2" .Has blue eyes and a muscular body build, is still agile and swift. Brown, medium length hair. wears cloaks and loose clothes.
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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Character Biography speaks of magic and dark enchanting. You cannot have this in your backstory, as it doesn’t comply with server lore and you cannot start off with magical afflictions or happenings. This should all be done through roleplay in-game. You can speak about Shade magic, though this part doesn’t seem 
    • “I look up, and my parents, cloaked in darkness, are enchanting me, trying to take me to the dark. I look down, and see blood. my blood, and i realize, i don’t remember anything. I watched my parents flee to a dark mountain, never to be seen again, and from then on swore an oath of blood to extinguish the darkness. I traveled far and wide, learning skills to fight the dark, I made friends, and lost family. I will not fail my oath. I am Aaron Brookwood, and i will  finish what i started.”
  • You mention “ the great collapse” in your Character Biography, though the only Great Collapse I know of certainly didn’t happen within 20 years ago. Please correct this accordingly. 
  • Please fix your grammar, punctuation, and spelling to the best of your ability. I recommend using a program to check your grammar. Grammarly is a free one. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

 

 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Character Biography speaks of “the dead”. Do you mean... zombies?
  • Your Character Biography is much, much better, and so is your grammar and such. Good job!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Character Biography speaks of “zombies”. There are none currently in LotC lore. Please revise this so that your application is following our server’s lore!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Apologizes, didn’t catch this a moment ago. But “Rilath” is very old and not something that just anyone would know. You can reference Shade magic, and your character can believe that the family might have been dark, but this is something that he wouldn’t know. Just remove this part from your Character Biography, and you’re good.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

 

Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg LotsOfMuffins, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

 

After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

 

When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

 

I highly recommend you join the New Player Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

 

In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race. 

 

If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

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