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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To avoid power gaming, a player should instead of committing an action that could end a character's life, or a drastic decision that could alter a player's life. It should instead be left open, so the other player could make a decision on the action. This lets both players perform actions that don't force one to do something the others wants. If a character wants to be stabbed, he will then tell the player, "Axious stabbed Gerald."
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a player sees information, a mob, or a player they knew nothing about before, they need to learn about it through the characters view. If Axious saw a man talking to another about betraying someone, he would have valid information, but if that character was talking in a VC about it to another person, the character himself did not hear about it.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Axious Valkaris
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Axious is a 6'2, 29-year-old man. He weighs about 190 lbs. He has Burnette Hair and Beard, amber eyes, blinded in one. He wears armor, stolen.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


He sat, his eyes low yet, his gaze locked onto his surroundings. His body ached, hurt from the 'past life', so he called it. "I don't remember, why can't I remember. Wait, I am, home. I must say this tent, it brings memories, me, and my brothers would sit in our tent, reassuring each other we would be ok, no matter who crossed us. I wish I could go back and warn them of the troubles we faced ahead." He raised his head meeting her gaze, his blind eye, glistening like glass in the candlelight.

 

The hag looked not at him, but at his spirit, maybe even his very soul. "You are young, yet you carry yourself as if you have lived a lifetime."

 

His gaze shifted back to her. "My name is Axious Valkaris. My name may not mean much, but it carries the weight of my family."

He lowered his eyes, thinking back to the past. "My parents died when I was young, too young for the things I had to witness. The very man who sent for their deaths, gave me this scar." He felt his face, tracing the scar on his eye. "As I grew, I found others like me, long forgotten by the world. We survived for what with what little we had; we fought each other like brothers fighting over who is loved more by their parents. If only history was written true men, but no. They died by the very hands they swore they swore to never bow, we were foolish then. What I learned, they died for."

 

The hag slowly stood.

"Your past doesn't define your future, those scars tell stories, not nightmares. Axious Valkaris, you may find happiness here, if you do find it here, I doubt you will anywhere else." 

The hag then left, leaving him to his own shadow.

 

 

Backstory: 

Axious was born into a family of honor, Chivalry was their guide to life. His father taught him all about life, how to treat others, himself, and the ones he held dearest to his heart. Unfortunately, life didn't follow the rules of Chivalry, when his village was attacked, his parents were killed. He watched as his friends were slaughtered, wolves were more merciful than those men. When it was his turn, the men played with him, they tossed his around like a toy. When they were done, a man approached him, Axious, only 12 at the time, still remembers his words "If I killed you, who would tell our story?" That man left him scarred, not just mentally, the men cut his eye, just one quick slash to remind him. 

 

As Axious grew older, he found friendship in those who also had their lives stripped from them. They were fierce, almost like ghosts in the night. They stole for those who couldn't buy, no child should suffer what they had. Even with these deeds, they're fate was sealed. A trap set by the same man who killed his family. We set on a quest, in hopes of finally freeing the people from an enemy that cost the pain and suffering of thousands. When the time came, they fought likes brothers, they even thought they would win. If only he could have warned them, if only he knew the fate of his brothers in arms. In the end, they lost the war, his friends, brothers. They were lost, he fought till his last breath, then those same words rung in his ear. "If I killed you, who would tell our story?" That man looked at him, the same man who killed his family, now finished the job.

 

Axious was presumed dead, the torture was brutal, he was beaten, left for dead at the riverbank. When all was done, the river consumed him. He was washed away into the water, how far, how long? He may never know, but when he awoke, he washed up in a marsh, now staring in the eyes if an old lady, "Tell me your story."

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it not exactly what we are looking for

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

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  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please make it so your character is speaking about their backstory within a roleplay format.

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re 

doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is 1.21.5

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord smol_bean . I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg Smol_bean0  to find me in game. If I’m not around You can always do /creq with your questions or you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

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Have fun role playing! :D

 

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