Thealtyzer

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your Metagaming definition is incorrect, please correct this and clarify it, adding an example if possible. The definition for such is here, just remember not to plagiarise!

- Your Powergaming definition is not quite clear, please expand on it and clarify it, adding an example. The definition for such is here, just remember not to plagiarise!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- Your character is described as a Dark Elf, yet the skin you use shows her to have pale skin and red hair. Please read over the Dark Elf lore, and pick a more suitable skin.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

- In the section titled Character Description, you have given a description of their upbringing and personality. Instead, please replace this with a physical description and put character traits and history in the Bio section instead.

- Your bio section is rather short and does not contain much information about your character, please expand this into a decently sized paragraph and include 2 lore references.

- Your interesting facts do not include a negative trait, please correct this and replace one of your interesting facts with a negative personality trait, a mental weakness or a physical ailment.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few more changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are still doing great!

- Your Powergaming definition is still not quite clear, please expand on it and clarify it, perhaps choosing a more fitting example. The definition for such is here, just remember not to plagiarise!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- Your character is described as a human, yet the skin you used gives them ears and a tail. Please correct this, and choose something more fitting for your character.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

- Your bio section is still rather short and does not contain much information about your character, please expand this into a decently sized paragraph (around 7 sentences at least) and include 2 lore references. I would highly advise you to look through the wiki and familiarise yourself more with some of the lore, including 2 pieces here in your application. For example, the name of the city that they were born in/live in now would be seen as a lore reference.

- I’m a little confused to the fact that you have described them as very mentally strong etc, yet have also said that she has depression? If you could clarify what you mean by this, it would be much appreciated (currently a little unsure whether you mean that she is absolutely mentally well, contrasting with your later statement, or just that she has a strong mindset, making her good at handling situations.). The part that reads ‘he is in very good condition’ is also quite confusing to me, please clarify what you mean by this,,

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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hello ?

Hi there, you have still not fixed all that I have asked, I am afraid.. Please do this, and feel free to PM me if you need any assistance with this, or anything in fact! ❤️ You need to include 2 lore references in your bio, and I would suggest developing it a bit more also!

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few more changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are still doing great!

  

- Your application is still lacking 2 lore references, these can be city names or events that have happened. I suggest looking through the wiki to find these.

- Your character cannot have any sort of magical ability, you have to learn magic in game. It says that your character ‘awakens powers of necromancy’, please remove this..

- I would suggest further developing the current points of your bio, rather than adding more.. It says that your character’s parents died in an ‘unhappy way’, it may be better to clarify this.

- I’m afraid I can’t write your bio for you, yet if you need any assistance with the things you are writing, then I can try to assist~~ feel free to pm me on forums, discord, or in game if I’m around!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/179894-new-player-guide/?pagecomment1690465=1

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!

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