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TheOnyxDragon

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use information that your character in a role playing game wouldn't have. You are using "meta" knowledge. It's essentially cheating.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you build your character to be best in a specific section, typically-but not always-in combat.
    Status: Pending
Character Name: Luna Wolff
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She has light blue-ish hair and red eyes. Jet-black skin. She likes to wear black, two-piece clothing (Shirt and shorts) along with boots.
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Riftblade

Pending.

 

- Avoid using word for word information from the wiki as this can be seen as plagiarism, this information also isn't something that always will be known in roleplay.

- There isn't really ancient elven, there is normal elven however most of the words have been lost to the past. I'd advise to sticking to your more basic phrases, words,     and such.

-Why Linandria? Ker'nor may be a better location for a Dark Elf to be born.

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona is good at what they are good at.

- For interesting facts, explain more in detail how your persona injured their right shoulder and how they lost their ability to see in one eye.

- I recommend changing the part about having excellent hearing since it seems a bit much to learn skilled healing through simply eavesdropping 

- Add more detail and information if you can.

 

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions. feel free to message me or contact me.

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